Webnovel Author: Cynical_Stranger

Suddenly, he felt a searing pain in his head. It felt like someone was stirring up his brains with a red hot metal rod. Gritting his teeth, he waited for the pain to fade away.

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

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A poison for the soul, interesting.

He knew that there was a type of poison, the "Reincarnation Poison", that can be used for murder. This poison breaks the bond formed by the soul and the body, forcing the soul to reincarnate into a new life, effectively killing the person, as all the memories would be lost. Unlike others, this poison had no cure at all, because it directly targets the soul.

Soul Split

Fantasy · ElPrimo

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Posted

I was bored at the start but this novel grow on me. I laughed out loud a couple of times and the character of the demon god is likable and fun so far. I find it kind of weird that his parents named him Lucifer like they knew he was a demon god. On top of that, how is he moving around and using magic when he is only months old? Even if he is a god, physically he is still just a baby. Overall I enjoyed this novel and may be back for more.

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Fantasy · the_clumsy_guy

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

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lol

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Fantasy · the_clumsy_guy

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Commented

Remember to add a "." at the end of your sentences.

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Fantasy · the_clumsy_guy

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

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Not bad so far, the demon god's last words were hilarious.

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Fantasy · the_clumsy_guy

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

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I wonder if the historians will fabricate more glories last words for the demon king.

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Fantasy · the_clumsy_guy

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

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lol, I imagine him waving his hand and then ragdolling with a death scream.

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Fantasy · the_clumsy_guy

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Posted

Not a bad start. You have grammar mistakes here and there and some of your sentences are a bit too long. I do like the way you describe things so far, paints a clear enough picture. I would appreciate more descriptions of the surrounding. Overall, a good start.

Crimson Overlord

Fantasy · Nickaido

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

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*vampire's doing

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Fantasy · Nickaido

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Commented

*listen to the hunters

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Crimson Overlord

Fantasy · Nickaido

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Posted

while I didn't read all the chapters yet, it is not bad so far. I really like your writing style, it is very deceptive. It paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind.

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Fantasy · bunnyrabbit

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Commented

Not bad so far.

ch 0 1 Jack Miller

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Fantasy · bunnyrabbit

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Commented

Interesting start

Facing the mirror, I hugged my knees as I sat on the floor with my back leaning at the side of the bed. I poured water into the glass from the pitcher and reached for the unopened medicine bottle beside me and downed it all as the bitter taste lingered and spread throughout my tongue. Three empty medicine bottles can be found rolling by my feet. I threw the fourth one clashing it with the other bottles.

The JOKER

Fantasy · bunnyrabbit

Cynical_Stranger

2yr

Commented

lol

[WARNING!! This is just a fiction story so don't follow anything that's written in this chapter. Because you won't be transmigrated, YOU WILL DIE!]

The JOKER

Fantasy · bunnyrabbit

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