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maybe you'd have more popularity if you did take reviews more seriously and didn't only seek good comments to boosts you're ego and superficially the rating on a website no one trust anyway,.

Do you delete all the non-positive comments?

And just, I can't not empaphise more on the akwardness of the novel, if you want a 'son of luck' to elevate himself why not just write "anyway for .......... , as long as he survive today, he's sure to make Wang Jian pay in the future. he is confident because he had always been weaker than others and had been humiliated during several years but in the end he was the one who slapped the face of those who mocked him. Today he's weaker but what about tomorrow? His luck had always been good soon enough he's confident that he'll stumble upon a good opportunity that will allow him make a come back, turn the tide and kill Wang Jian in one fell swoop. ........(son of fortune): 30years hedong 30yeras hexi, don't bully the young into poverty' " but the author reduced this chinese tradition to "AHHH I've vainquished countless foes, you'll be one of many"... The author can take a chinese concept but can't take the chinese idioms? SO he just prefer to reduce to subpar quality... SAD

AH yeees, to highlight my first point, when you read a cultivation novel, when the character are elevated by themselves or by others, what is empaphised is the techniques they're cultivating, the physiques they have, their factual records, their position in their sect or their teachers. Never have I read something like "I've participed in countless war" in a novel like this, I swear it's weird, unfamiliar and poorly thought. Why? Because fighting exp is fighting exp, nothing else, it's not combat power.

Low rate not because it represent the quality of the novel but because the rate rn is too high for what it is and the actual defects of the novel. First I have a big issue with the narration. I hate it when the conversation are "I've vanquished countless foes, you'll be one of many" when the talking guy is 20. I don't care if it's a cultivation or a wuxia novel, you need to integrate something in your head, author. When it come to cultivation in xianxia novel with immortals and all or training in murim type novel, or a mix like in this one it doesn't change the fact that the life experience are actually lower than when it come to mundane humans. Why? Because they're supposed to have passed a majority of their life training or cultivating, not fighting. Futhermore, beyond that, I just find it cringe to elevate yourself like this, it's just weird and I swear I've never read something like this in any other novel so it's even more unfamiliar and weird. The effort of making it as though it was some medieval setting with the conversation is also cringe seriously, things like "boundless strengh" and all are weirds, it's really hard to read and dismish the experience read a lot, really. Overall it's a good novel, as I said the low rate is just because the rate rn is too high for the low quality of the writing and the akwardness the author make me feel when I read this. Second issue is the politic in the novel, we can see the author is really trying but he's not good at it. There's a bad mix of empire, relegion and a lot of differents organization of differents size and it's not well-mixed, there's a lot of plot holes with the early part and within the empire itself the differents positions are bad-established, the author doesn't understand himself what he's writing and what it's supposed to mean. I won't give examples because I don't want to put this on "spoiler warning" but if you want some, ask away. So for these 2 points this novel should be rated lower, before it was not that big of an issue but it begin to be right now.

Because it deserve it. When I said it was nice I was talking about the start, the low-rating is for the lasts chapters I've read. It's uselss to make a good start if you can't keep up, let's not even talk about keeping up at this point it's called "throwing" what the author do. Futhermore the rating is not according to what I feel but objectives qualities obiously. It deserve nothing more than 1 star in all aspect if you think about it.

I've read up to chapter 584 here's my 2nd review ; At the start the world building is great, the grammar is not much but it's readable, the dialogues are nice and the relationships between the characters feels real. Sadly it quickly go downroad, first and foremost Felix fast become an arrogant and condescending character, while at the start he is someone sympathic (He was not a pushover just sympathic) he quickly become someone who avoid, ignore and mostly look down on others and while somes would say it's normal because he's stronger or 'greater' don't forget that it's the same guy who constantly whine to Asna or Jormungandr or whoever that the universe is unfair blabla. . So in short he's an hypocrite who suck up to those whom he consider 'greater' like the primogenitors, it can be a matter of course and considered 'normal' but to put it bluntly, it's just disgusting to read about a guy who advocate fairness while looking down on those who are less lucky and not less 'competent' while being kind and considerate in the purpose to be gifted opportunities. Next come the plot, to put it bluntly here too, there's none. It's just the primogenitors that argue with each others, it seem like a plot but it's bullsh1t, they have never hurt each others for real, I mean they can hurt each others physically and emotionnally, but let's be honnest who would have a feud over matters like that? I'm in no place to state on what basis can or can't people kill each others, but the primogenitors are described as eternal beings, even if they hated each others deeply at one point the eternity should've created something like 'love from hate', a sense of kinship in spite of everything. Here I am criticizing the lack of rationnality in the conflict. And don't talk about descendants, legacy and whatnot, in the first place they never cared about things like that, hell, Thor and Jorgumandr sent their descendant to kill each others for fun. The premise of the dispute between the 2 factions is literally "What? What did you say to my bro?" And if you really want to talk about the so-called "darken faction", in my opinion it's just ridiculous for the plot to be based on the big kids called "primogenitors" who literraly never had really grown up. From the start the conflict rested just on a point of view basis, no one was truly in the wrong, it's just guys angry with each others, and at this point it was fine we're no kids, nobody need a 'true evil' to be the antagonist as long as the story goes finely, but the author, as if to add weight to story and make the antagonists true 'evil people' make them petty. That's ridiculous. There was thousands ways to create true weight for the story and even add some mystery to the story but the author just started a fine concept and threw the towel. Futhermore I believe the author made Felix an idiot both an purpose and unconsciously : How many times does he ask or say things that goes directly against common sense of the novel? And I hate the dynamic of teacher who say "Discover by yourself" as if it was a good way to teach. The truth is that if every teachers said "Do it by yourself" we'd still be in the middle-age, what I'm criticizing here is that the author take too much after chinese novels, it's already somewhat seen but it's this point that really disgust me. People can't learn by themselves quickly and make explosive progress, it's impossible, people that studies and discover things by themselves take years to achieve something, the author know it, it's said several times by the 'primogenitors' "it took my millions of years to discover this by myself" so why does he make the MC do it by himself and doesn't just teach him? "I'll give you an hint" bro i'm not saying that hints are useless but is it what you base your teachings on? Lastly there'd come the grammar, truthfully from the start it was never too great but it become worse and worse as time goes, the author don't even pretend to care, there's of everything, each chapter you got to see something nice, 'saw' in place of 'seen' 'more stronger', this kind of thing and of course things like 'sylvia' who become 'slyvia' '11th generations bracelet' who become the '13th' or the '12th' with literally 2 chapters in between. Of course that's what they call typpo or lack of attention, but it's in every chapter, the author really don't pretend to care I said. The dialogues are a mix of curses and bland and tastless description. The narratives is really irrelevant the author don't even pretend to care I said, just click on a random chapters it's a mix of "damn, sh*t, bullsh*t" the author can't have a character speaking without saying 'sh*t', really. The descriptions are bland, the reasons behind actions are just bad, it's literally each time "because i want and what will you do" and when he care to explain a bit more it's nonsense each time. In my opinion it's good at the start so it got the reader hooked, next it's somewhat fast paced, there's not too much info dump and the action is fine so the reader continue to read even if it get frustrating and all but it's just bad, don't read it.

Seriously you said all of this but it's all sh1t omg, there's literally nothing true in what you said. At least we could say "that's his opinion" despite it being a really bad opinion, an ape's opinion even, but no, that's not even the case, you just didn't read. "He become someone's slave and that's it". I swear on 9 generations of my family that it get all I have to hold myself back you're just an animal to write all that when you don't even know what you're saying

Bro that's the point of the novel, sunny is the reader's protagonist while neph is the world's and sunny's protagonist. The characters development are far from random, I really can't understand where you got this from seriously? When sunny become crazy because of loneliness? When his relationship get strained with cassie because she give his weakpoint to neph? I really can't understand, the characters development is one of the strong point of the novel on the contrary, Sunny feel real and in his place I would react the same in every situation cause it make sense and is far from 'random' as you say. He become a slave and that's it? Wrong. You didn't even read bro. Spoiler: no he doesn't accept it, so that's not 'and that's it'. You say that he doesn't need to lie to be cunning, deceitfull, etc.. ..Yes and the author didn't need you to tell because that's already like this bro, seriously did you even read? In my opinion you've just flown over the novel while reading 1 chapter seriously every 3 chapters, seriously how can you talk about the "beach chapter" as if it was an important chapter while it was litteraly as mentionned in the chapter itself, a slight break during their long and tedious travel. A guy who didn't read seriously, you could say you don't like it but what you say to justify it is nothing but sh1t

Nothing much to say just perfect, but please sir author, don't make a bad ending please, if neph and sunny could not be together in the end I swear it would be the end of my life