Positive Point The story is getting interesting with every chapter, I have noticed the writing quality has gotten better with the chapters. Negative Point The conversation among the characters and the delivery of dialogue is not very smooth, it maybe because it is writers first piece of work. I will again review it when it reaches 50 chapter mark, hope you continue writing..
Fantasy · Zero_O
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Positive Point The story is getting interesting with every chapter, I have noticed the writing quality has gotten better with the chapters. Negative Point The conversation among the characters and the delivery of dialogue is not very smooth, it maybe because it is writers first piece of work. I will again review it when it reaches 50 chapter mark, hope you continue writing..
Fall Of Asura Lord
Fantasy · Zero_O