Just a 17 year old who likes writing.
2021-10-09 Joined India
That's even better :)
ch 0 1 Chapter 1-Mysterious Being
Fantasy · Infernox_AOF
Why put it in self promotion kōzo..
ch 0 1 Chapter 1-Mysterious Being
Fantasy · Infernox_AOF
The start felt kinda dragging but overall it's a great first chapter. Enjoyed it!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1-Mysterious Being
Fantasy · Infernox_AOF
Benjamin is kinda intriguing.
ch 0 1 First sight
Urban · Deborah_Pruijmboom
Things just got a lot more interesting in just a few lines.
I knew I had to be strong for my family. If I managed to do well this year, the Sultan would clear my families debt. I had never been away from home. I looked around when I heard footsteps, quickly wiping the tears from my cheeks.
Urban · Deborah_Pruijmboom
NeoNym system is giving a mundane idea, a creative and beautiful execution with a touch of confusion. The story tells the tale from various POVs, which in itself is unique. You won't see this sort of storytelling in other works. The POVs provide readers with insights about the characters' lives and thus it's one of my favourite things about the novel. However, it's also one of the things which sometimes results in a mediocre effect. The first chapter was kinda confusing for me but that's a subjective issue, what could definitely be pointed that at moments the story feels lack lustered. On one hand, you have this creative approach of POV storytelling. On the other, you feel it to be restrictive at moments. Other than that, it's a splendid book.
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Thank you for your kind words. Really motivates me to push myself to become even better.
ch 0 3 A Father's Valour
War · Cultureshock_poet
That's meant to be a part of another conversation that took place somewhere between two individuals, kind of like a background conversations. I would have italicized those but there was no option so I had to put them under stars.
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War · Cultureshock_poet
There are phases of character development he goes through. He starts of as a normal 17-year-old with a blessed strategic prowess. He is resilient, optimistic and often considers ideal solutions to real world problems. He loves his father the most. Currently, he is a ruthless killing machine, he's manipulative and for the most of time tries to suppress his emotions (another voice inside his head). I hope this much is enough. You'll get a much better understanding of his character in further reading.
ch 0 1 The Day It Happened
War · Cultureshock_poet
Probably increasing interaction ..
ch 0 1 Chapter 1-Mysterious Being
The Void-Beings Journey of Self Enlightenment
Fantasy · Infernox_AOF