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I don't think the author should of made Ron punch Hermoine while on the boat ride and then proceeded to not even show anything about Ron being punished for punching another 11 year old in front of everyone

Complete dog shit story, seems like you stole the story and threw it into google translate and didnt even bother to check for errors, made weasleys way worse than normal, dont like how the stroy is set up, this is the worst story i have ever read, would not suggest anyone to read it

the story seems good but it is unreadable due to translation problems, would suggest you dont read this until the author fixes the translation problems, one example is nick fury being called lu dantian or braised egg not a good translation

One of the best adaptations of Harry Potter and a refreshing take compared to many other fan fics. 9.9/10 only issue I had is it ended way too soon. This is one of the rare fan fics where you want it to last longer due to how good it is. It is also very different from the original HP as hermoine and ron are never friends with harry, hell hermoine dies due to the troll attack

The best harry Potter book i have ever read, love how much it talks about the culture of the wizarding world because it gives it so much depth, glad the author showed how hermoine, dummbledore and the weasleys would be if it was real, love how fast snape gets arrested, glad the love interest was daphne and not hermoine or ginny as both dont help the story, wish the author didnt drop this as there is no way its completed due to the way it was left

Decent story but terrible writing, would not suggest anyone try read this as its barely readable [img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]

Would highly recommend this book, the author has made a great book about mha and i hope they continue the book as its one of the best i have read

Most likely the author has thought that due to the mc being present, the mc created a butterfly effect which changed some characters behaviors a bit, an example would be naruto as the mc made sure to interact with him whenever he had the chance meaning narutos personality should of changed as naruto in the original story never had anyone until the academy

One of, if not the best naruto fan fic i have ever read as the author doesnt make the character op for no reason. The author also also adds details into the story that most wouldnt even think of like adding some more senju clan members and shows more in depth info about each clan, an example would be how the senju has vassal clans. I would highly suggest everyone to give this a read as the book is really good and has long chapters

It seems like a translation as sometimes the names changes around while some names of characters and places were just straight up changed to something else, an example is Yinsen who helped iron man out of the cave, in this book his name changed to ethan, other than translation problems it seems like a good book and would suggest author fixes some of these problems in the chapters as most people would drop this book due to these simple problems as i think if these simple problems were fixed the book would be amazing

Seems like a child wrote this with how bad the quality is and the whole time he was in the lightning village was skipped as if they don't care about the story as who skips the first 13 year of a main characters life when writing about Naruto world. i would suggest that you don't waste your time reading this unless the author rewrites it in a way that makes it more readable as you can't tell who is talking in the book right now, the abilities/talents of the mc seems good but sadly the author didn't write the story that good

A lot of writing errors and seems like it was copied and translated using google translate then posted without a care in the world for the quality of the story

Love this book and how the book is focusing on the mc and not really speaking about harry other than the beginning of the book where mc becomes his friend also love how the author built up the story and the whole world in the book as it adds a ton to it, if someone is looking to read HP book i would highly suggest this. I really hope the author keeps going with this book as its really good and the author seems way to good at writing books in my opinion

how can people read this i mean it starts off half way through the story giving you info about him without showing you how he gets there at all, it also doesn't even give any background about him or his friends/family, if you want to read a story that builds the character from the start dont read this as it just throws you into it halfway through

I really hope you continue this or redo it as this is the best book of the arrow verse I have seen and read but I get it if you don't, I hope you make more books as you seem like you got good ideas and you know how to use them to make people like your book

amazing so far but wish author would continue it as this is the only good Percy Jackson book I have found, 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 limit