Badges 14
Moments 11
"The injury in his soul was worse than before." or "The injury in his soul was still as bad as ever." would both be correct, what you have here is a mix of both and doesn't make sense in terms of English sentence structure as the tenses are conflicting.
The injury in his soul was still as worse as ever.
Re: Evolution Online
Fantasy · Yolohy
Lol oh fimmerment is such a funny word.
Many pieces continued to move as time moved forward, with the surrounding sects and forces around Time Immemorial Sect receiving information about and preparing for a singular event, the opening of the Treasure Abode of a long-gone Void Fimmerment Realm Cultivator!
Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
Games · Adui
pretty sure the word you want to use is "anomolies"
The Demon Capital was large, with the Rulers spread out in many directions, but this appearance of powerful unknown anemones brought them to full attention.
Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
Games · Adui
that's quite the number of words for one thing to happen.
ch 1173 A Familiar Scenery
Cultivation Online
Games · MyLittleBrother
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 303 Small Dens
Spirit Taming
Fantasy · 1King_Rep1
I noticed it seems like the writing is rushed and not proof read, there are a lot of run on sentences. There are also sentences, in which punctuation makes no sense at all, especially when using speech or descriptions.
ch 26 A new start ?
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Is it not redundant to add the second much higher?
Stopped at the Sixth Floor of the Sky Tower, his strength was much higher than theirs, no, much higher.
Hyperdimensional Universe: I have Three Thousand Ultimate Talents
Eastern · A Sea Of Soup