Webnovel Author: Criticalz - Novel Collection

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2yr

Replied to zerzy

I can very well see where you're coming from. Maybe I did it wrong, but my idea was to hint towards the idea of technology being a viable aspect in battle, amongst other future ideas. My inspiration for it was how the anime/manga Naruto uses it. But, like you said, it was probably abruptly implemented.

Akogare immediately smiles at this idea, while Naderamu groans. "YEAH! The arcade sounds good! How about you Naderamu?" Akogare enthusiastically responds, then questions.

The Village Disciples

Fantasy · Criticalz

Criticalz

2yr

Replied to zerzy

Thanks for the constructive criticism! As I was writing these chapters, I did feel that it was a bit rushed. The more the story progresses, the more it does slow down, especially during volume two. Hopefully a few more of the chapters are to your liking!

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The Village Disciples

Fantasy · Criticalz

Criticalz

2yr

Replied to DragonGodOfIce

Regarding the chemistry between the characters in the novel, I'm not quite sure that I'll be implementing a harem of any sort. But, for romance alone, that is definitely a viable aspect of the novel, like the main character finding a lover throughout the novel or something along those lines. I'm wanting to pace my novel a bit, so if you're looking for a novel with romance that is relevant at the beginning of the story, this may not be a novel you'll enjoy.

The Village Disciples

Fantasy · Criticalz