I am speechless. Like, actually, forgetting to capitalize the first letter of your paragraphs aside, your writing is pretty good! Looking forward to future chapters!
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Uhh, magic--yeah, magic! That's what happening to you! Magic... right?
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Fantasy · Lenaleia
So she just has to sit there and chill whenever the system goes down? LOL
ch 15 Reunited
Fantasy · Lenaleia
Oh? So the system reacts to her emotions. S'ppose that makes sense! She had a sense of revenge that's what got her the system, as soon as she set her goals on other things, the system disappeared for a while. Gotta stay focused girl!
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Fantasy · Lenaleia
Thank you for the chapter!
ch 14 Beneath the Moonlight
Fantasy · Lenaleia
I like to imagine the system is back already and she just hasn't tried to summon it, all while good ol peanut gallery tries to find her
I can feel the strain in my arms from all this work I've done today—man, I really need to invest in that strength stat. Still, I wrap one roast, then another with another packet of leaves and clay. Each roast is set into the center of a packet and the leaves are folded over into a tight bundle. A final smear of clay seals the edges.
Fantasy · Lenaleia
Just a casual threat
"Get out!" My blood boils as he mentions my father. That part of my life lingered in my soul. I couldn't forget it and had to live with it. He shakes his head. Dwen walks towards the stairs but halts at my side and says, "Dragons aren't the only monsters."
Fantasy · Kay_Skye4549
Thank you for the chapter(s)! You've got me all shades of intrigued now!
ch 10 Alone
Fantasy · Lenaleia
Thief! The wolf is a thief!
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Fantasy · Lenaleia
Ruh roh
I watch with bated breath as the scrawny gray wolf steps beside me.
Fantasy · Lenaleia
Loving it! Most conversations in writing aren't as organic as this. Even I struggle to keep them flowing. Just love the tiny details!
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Fantasy · Lenaleia
This is terrible life advice!
''Because she was thinking she's hella gorgeous. You see now?'' The fox said.
How to be a Succubus
Games · Lolth