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Approaching the boat, something caught my eye, and a sense of wonder and anticipation washed over me. Despite its small size, it exuded a certain charm that set it apart from the other vessels in Prowlers' Cove. It was a sight to behold, showcasing the ingenuity and craftsmanship of its creator within this fantastical medieval world. The boat's hull, made of polished wood, shimmered under the moonlit sky. Intricate carvings adorned its sides, depicting mythical creatures and symbols of ancient lore. Each stroke of the chisel seemed to breathe life into the wood, creating a tapestry of fantastical scenes that stirred the imagination. Though smaller compared to the larger ships, the boat's sail was a work of art in itself. Woven from sturdy fabric, it displayed vibrant colors and intricate patterns that danced in the breeze. Embroidered onto the sail were symbols of ancient runes and sigils. like do you really have to explain it in three paragraphs. whyyyy?

I like the story and the way it is improving, the further development But for me i could not understand why is the author making reading more complex, like he could have just said I am always thinking about him instead he goes on explaining poetically, becoz of it, it is only making harder to understand I don't know whether it is to increase the word cound odr whatever it may be but that is the only thing which I don't like about it

the story is good but the length of chapters is small 🤏

I think that "I was killed by author" would have been a correct name for novel 😂🤣

It is a... my bad

I is a cliche story, but the execution and romance and everything is well writen

yeah true man, the story really changed a lot and in a good way

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the story is good and the pacing is somewhat fast but i can see way too many similarities between overgeared and this so i am hoping atleast in the upcoming chapters it won't be the same 😑