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Excellent story, I highly recommend it .......... I like the humor that it has, political intrigues is something that I have always liked and the author exploits it in the best way

Impressive story, the way the MC makes decisions is splendid, the way you have done the story shows more politics and logic than other stories I have read, in a nutshell your story is spectacular.

The story is very good ...... although things happen a little faster it can be overlooked, I like that it integrates several things from the mythology and that it explains about the runes..............

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hello!!....you can put your story on wattpad of course clarifying that it is of your authorship................ Apart from that, the story goes on like this, it's spectacular................

An interesting story.......... but the character's rise in power is a bit slow, there are few things in the writing that need to be changed and more important to me is that the author uses deity to refer to the domain of the character and it is not deity but divinity and the MC is not a God, he is a demi-god, that they do not have divinity or domain, they only have it when they are promoted to gods ..... but the rest is fine ..

It's a good story ......... there are not so many complications in the plot everything is well organized and put in its place as if it were always there besides that in this story it is not like the others in the sense in which that put the paranoid character with danzón, or a crazy manipulator of hiruzen or an arrogant and stupid sasuke, the power is balanced although there are few things that make the balance of power lose but the rest is an excellent story.

Interés amoroso que sea Hanabi , en los muchos fanfic que e leído se pueden contar con la mano los que an puesto a hanabi de pareja del MC o sale en el fic, además es tedioso poner siempre a los mismo personajes de pareja del MC un cambio como este seria bueno .

Bueno ....bueno esto se pone más y más interesante todo hará ahora esta bien no e encontrado ninguna falla además me gusta por que el MC no es op o manda a todos a la mierda antes de los 15 años eso lo vuelve aburrido ya que en todas las peleas se sabe que el va a ganar con facilidad sigue así como lo as hecho desde el principio

Excelente como lo estas haciendo aunque no me guste el drama tu historia me a atraído mucho ciertamente espero con hancias el siguiente capítulo una pregunta ¿cuanto se entera el inframundo y las demás facciones de la existencia de Alex ? ; a y si puedes hacer más realista los poderes de los demás por que el anime tiene vuelto loco los niveles de poderes 👍👍👍👍