vaheesta_bhesadia

8mth

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Can't access the chapter, what's up

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vaheesta_bhesadia

8mth

Posted

Good pace, background should be built more.

The Pack's Girl (New Link)

Fantasy · K.K.S.

vaheesta_bhesadia

1yr

Posted

I thoroughly enjoyed reading all the short stories, individually also each story was very well written. Together it creates a beautiful world that we like to read about. The grammar and quality of the language was flawless. Big thanks to the writer ❤️❤️. please continue the storyline as I'm sure more characters can easily be added with new stories.

The Macconwood Wolf Pack

Fantasy · C.D. Gorri

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Posted

The story was well written and characters strong but in places it was confusing who the author was talking about also one character's name got changed by mistake in the end, that shouldn't happen. Overall very enjoyable Big thanks to the author.

Sadistic Mates

Fantasy · Jessica Hall

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Posted

The story is riveting, the characters are believeable. The story is captivating so that you are left eagerly waiting for the next read. I would have liked the ending to be more complete as many characters are left with incomplete stories. All in all very enjoyable.

Sinful Mates

Fantasy · Jessica Hall

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Commented

Waiting impatiently for new chapters, like a cat on a hot tin roof. Please upload new chapters, please please please. By the way once again love the description of little wolf pup singing "it's raining wolves".

ch 119 Earth Wear

A Werewolf's Seduction

Fantasy · SerafinaF

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Commented

Cutes chapter, I keep coming back to read the first few chapters. Eagerly following the story.

ch 0 2 New Orleans Hurricane

A Werewolf's Seduction

Fantasy · SerafinaF

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Commented

What's the rush, servants we're not allowed to push aristocrats around, people waited for them they didn't rush for others. Once she came to what was to be her new home she would have been shown around the whole house so that she could make any changes she wanted. Also horse riding was almost mandatory learning for young aristocrats of both gender, later if they didn't ride that was their wish.

ch 16 Chapter Fifteen

The Countess and Her Knight

History · Kiyah

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Commented

Bollywood script anyone? Even conservative Italians also would not react in such a way but Bollywood khandani log would definitely react so.

ch 0 6 Chapter 6

Forever Mine

Urban · SFwrires

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Posted

The story is captivating and kept a good pace throughout. Characters are believeable not confusing, I had to force myself to put the mobile down. Please update the rest of the story as soon as possible. [img=recommend]

A Werewolf's Seduction

Fantasy · SerafinaF

vaheesta_bhesadia

2yr

Commented

Great story. I liked that it wasn't stretched out but had good flow. Often I loose interest when the storyline takes unnecessary twists. Dear author keep the stories coming.

ch 42 Olga's story