Aliyah_Yang_7171

2yr

Posted

I feel like it's cool. I love the overall design, and basically everything. What I don't like is the fact that the author made her very strong and stuff. That doesn't make room for improvement. Or maybe I'm just wrong, and she has things to improve. But anyways, yeah. And also, she's strong, ye, but like she blacks out 2 times in 2 chapters? I'm surprised at that, and I hope blacking out doesn't become the norms. Otherwise, great story, continue. NOTE: I read your it's always the teachers book, it was good. The writing style was changed, but that's cool. Both writing styles were good. It's just different. You keep at it with the strong main female characters