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Writing the main character's purpose and motivation and making it interesting depends entirely on the talent of the writer. Romance and harem have nothing to do with it. There are very effective ways to increase the character's motivation in a fantasy world.

Also, there are many people that Odin fucks rather than his wives. This is not a harem!

He was doing this to enlarge the kingdom. Odin has many wives, in fact, all kings have more than one wife. The reason for this is not love. I'm just asking, can you imagine Odin flirting with a woman? Also, if a harem is added to this novel, it means female characters clinging to him. .That would be an absolute insult.

Are you saying this without reading it? I may be remembering wrong, but there was no romance in "Revenend Instanity". I think the problem is not in the novel but in your mindset. What makes a novel stand out is its story and world building. In a novel with good world building like Marvel, all the writer has to do is write a good story .

Adding a harem to this story would be an insult to the mythological character named Odin.

I don't understand why the rating is so high. It has potential but the author makes the story very boring. The main character is a brat and he's a coward, which makes it that much harder to read.

I am someone who seeks logic in actions. I think you should look for logic in some things.

I rated it very high as I don't want to deal with certain people.

It doesn't matter if she's with Erza. The problem for me is that Erza sticks to the mc. No need to be a fan, these episodes are really boring. (I haven't skipped a chapter in any novel I've read so far)

I am writing this review after reading 410 chapters. It was good at first, I was wondering about the next evolution of mc, then the character Erza entered the story, at first I was not bored. Then she became mc's girlfriend. There is no problem with that. The story continues and I am not bored. Erza re-entered the story and I got bored. Erza was hooked on mc (and it really narrowed me down) and I got really bored reading these chapters. In short, I was reading this story because of the realism of the main character (for example, I don't read novels where mc is polygamous because it doesn't seem realistic to me and prevents me from taking the novel seriously), but after Erza came, the realism of the novel gradually disappeared. I could only endure this for 30 chapters and left the novel. (my native language is not english :)

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A novel that doesn't deserve its rating. waste of time ......,..................................................... ..........................................