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I mean, from Iris's point of view. Furthermore, even though the entire planet is under her jurisdiction, there's no way she could know about a robbery happening on the other side of town immediately, for example. Unless an alarm sounds or something, he won't know. In the scene, as soon as the police officer was shot, a few seconds passed and the Flash appeared, you understand? Sure, maybe he was just passing by, but an investigator would initially think that perhaps he was already there.

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Because of this criminal, Iris just got a clue about the Flash. After all, it had just happened, how would he know if he wasn't already on the scene? If she's smart enough, she'll narrow down the number of potential candidates now.

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I understand, it's good to see the character's development. I just hope he manages to get something more useful with the system's points, so he's prepared for unforeseen situations. Fighting skills, further improving physique, perhaps some kind of spider-sense-like power to foresee dangers.Cunning can be developed over time. While a protagonist who is very powerful from the start is annoying, seeing the protagonist get beaten up excessively and being dominated or deceived is equally bad. Balance that out and don't let him be silly.

I hope the protagonist gets rid of him for good later on.

Okay, like a good villain, it's time to kill and dissolve in acid a chicken that's 1.80m tall and weighs 75kg.

If you want women, be prepared for the problems hahaha

I don't know how the story unfolds in the next chapters, but I think that since the protagonist is supposedly a villain, he should be a bit more manipulative with Natsuha and less emotional. She's taking his presence for granted, and that's not a good thing, either in the real world or in the story. We've already seen what she's like. If it were up to her, she wouldn't want to give up her original relationship while getting closer to the protagonist. With this type of girl, the protagonist should make her come to him, not the other way around.

It's normal for authors to make a few mistakes here and there. The most important thing is that the plot is well-written and doesn't feel forced. It's light and enjoyable to follow. Most fanfiction these days seems disjointed, especially with the increasingly frequent use of AI.Thanks for the chapter