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Fair enough. Solid point
Upon arriving at the living room, he could see Mira sitting on one of the couches, giggling with a wide smile on her face as she sat on one of the couches.
Welcome to the Multiverse Chat Group!
Anime & Comics · EclypseX
Sitting on the couch is mentioned twice in one sentence
Upon arriving at the living room, he could see Mira sitting on one of the couches, giggling with a wide smile on her face as she sat on one of the couches.
Welcome to the Multiverse Chat Group!
Anime & Comics · EclypseX
Han Solo is that you?
The XS stock light freighter was a relatively standard sized model of starship. The vessels had a saucer-shaped body, yellow plating, and a blunt cockpit with a narrow viewport that jutted forward from the ship's center. The aft of the freighters featured a heavily armored hull with a pair of sublight engines, and the craft were armed with two dorsal and two port-side laser cannons.
Star Wars A Galaxy Reborn
Others · Dr_Dred
Did you mean father
Ares reluctantly acquiesced, bowing his head in acceptance. "As you say, Mother."
DxD: The Dragon Oppai
Anime & Comics · Orael
Little confused here because of previous paragraphs
Artemis's anger flared at Ares's comment, her eyes blazing with fury. "How dare you call me less subtle than Ares! I am the hunter, the epitome of stealth and precision!"
DxD: The Dragon Oppai
Anime & Comics · Orael
This could use a correction at the end
Yennali continued teasing my balls with slow and sensual blows, before she finally stopped. Then once she did she took her nuts into my mouth.
Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Hey the previous chapter says 1 of 3 and this one says 3 of 3 so where is 2 of 3 at then?
ch 56 Enterprise Awakens
DxD Devils & Artefacts
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
He already took midoriyas
"They swiped it from me!" he exclaimed in despair, and he wasn't the only one. When the dust finally settled, several teams noticed the absence of their headbands. The only teams whose headbands hadn't been stolen were Midoriya's, Todoroki's, Shinsho's, Bakugo's, and Monoma's. Among these, the last two were still having their own face-off.
Naruto: My Harem Academia
Anime & Comics · Skythe
Quotation marks might not be necessary
"Eden actually didn't have clothing in his inventory. To be honest, other than emergency magic items, money, and some guns, it was mostly empty. He decided he should put some more essentials in there for a rainy day."
Adventures Of The Fateweaver (DXD and more)
Anime & Comics · Vex_900
There are only so many times you can say the same exact thing with slightly different words before people will just loose interest and drop the story
Alex looked at his shadowy twin, contemplating the significance of this power. It was a reflection of his newfound identity, a reminder that he was no longer just a mortal teenager. He was a Son of Hades, and his powers were a testament to that heritage.
Percy Jackson: The Son of Hades, Blessed by Death
Book&Literature · _The_Author_
Love the story, just ignore those people
ch 65 Announcement
IN Harry Potter With a System
Book&Literature · Dreamer_1297
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4. From Gates of Hell (DXD)
From The Gates Of Hell (DXD)
Anime & Comics · Crazy_Penguin
Daughters?
His daughters talked to them a bit about it, but having an expert present always generates interest.
The Fifth House: Galegold
Book&Literature · Cadenadeaventuras
Glad to see another up date
ch 35 Chapter 35: Ah Shiz, Here We Go Again
Percy Jackson: The Wolf Curse
Book&Literature · KingKiellNickiell
Left for dead zombies instead
(Author: I think it would be more appropriate for Saeko to call MC Sama. With Saeko's personality, she would consider MC as Shogun and she is a general under MC. Saeko will definitely be Mihawk's disciple in the future. Basically her world would be too boring for both her and the MC.The only reason to go to that world would probably be to collect Waifu.However, MC wasn't the one who took the initiative to capture Waifu. Meh, now how do I make the bastard MC go to HOTD world?)
DxD : Conquer Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Oniichanishere
Sentence was doubled
"This building….I don't recall there being a building like this here before. The one at the lead said." The one in the lead said.
Isekai Restaurant
Anime & Comics · CrossEdge
Can’t wait for more chapters
ch 0 6 Confused Feelings
Ban In DXD
Anime & Comics · IsekaiFan
This sentence is different from the rest. It’s black not white
I took a big breath as I stepped outside.
DC: Dimensional Luck
Anime & Comics · Sothisq