Webnovel Author: Four_Clover - Fanfic Collection

I've been meaning to ask this for some time now, but why are the characters in your fanfics so hórny? This is a genuine question out of curiosity, not to offend you or anything. It just feels weird reading the hórny dialogues the characters themselves usually don't say. Anyway, I rate this 5 stars but I give 1 star to break the review bot spam. Thank you for the free entertainment.

You've kinda ruined the first arc tbh. If you didn't give him so many perks, the level of immersion in Hunger Games could've been felt, but since he's basically Captain America with all buffs and technical knowledge most readers don't know of, the immersion was ruined and the first world basically became his playground without any tension. You should've given him the abilities after winning, maybe even some romance with Glimmer that would ultimately end in her death plus some drama or something, but no, you pushed in the cliche System at the start. Wasted potential, you have good writing but your planning is wack. Don't assume readers know what you are talking about, explain the powers to them slowly not info dumps with 10% actual plot. It's rare to have a Hunger Games Ff nowaday. Anyway, the novel isn't for me, but I wish you luck in your future works. You have a unique immersive writing but you can't capture realism in it's essence. I hope you continue to improve.

One Piece Fanboy gets a choice to pick between DC and One Piece. Guess what? He chose DC. 😂 😂 😂 Then he wakes up as Vandal Savage's brother (Doesn't have any relevance to the story) Takes on Roger's persona and wants to become a Pirate King in the age of Mythos. it's stupid and a waste of time, nothing changes with the plot. MC literally is a fuccing thug, just doing whatever the fuc he wants in the name of freedom. Author writes at the top of his head so the story progression is shlt. He introduced Boa Hancock as Aphrodite's sister then ask to be married in their first meeting. What was even the point of reincarnating in DC with Olympian Gods if you're not going to change anything and crossover it with One Piece? You should've written a One Piece fic to begin with.

I thought it was good because of the touching prologue at the start, but then the MC gets killed by his sister cliched style followed by him meeting Superman God. So I read the rest and recognized a pattern. You can check the author's works, he has good updating stability but his stories lack substance, full of plot holes, changing personality of the MC, cliche scenarios, etc. I thought he would improve from his previous works but it's all the same. It's a good wishfullfilment but that's it overall. The MC basically bros with Superman God but is actually working for him, anyways it's a wishfullfilment in a predictable storyline that the author slightly altered by adding extra tidbits like turning the OG main character a girl. (Bell from Danmachi to Bella) It follows an overpowered MC that can hunt at 3 years old, talk perfectly and none of the world's inhabitants are the wiser to point it out. Not my cup of tea, but good for wasting time if you turn off your brains.