the first few chaps have just been in your face info dumps pretty much
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Discussion with Priscilla
Fantasy · Nickaido
cheap
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Fantasy · Nickaido
archers always be the side characters, nice seeing them as the mc
When I first played a video game in my childhood, I had <Archer> as a job and I always played with it ever since.
Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious
second phase
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Fantasy · DonnEll
:(
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Fantasy · DonnEll
them fighting words
"Not much..." Alice said.
Fantasy · DonnEll
more then decent bruh, she couldn’t even determine it
"Your knowledge of the sword is decent, your observational abilities are also praiseworthy, to help this Saint recognize a fake item, you are very commendable"
Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress
he must’ve gotten heaps of soul points
The sea of demons was no more, only the desolate, desert-like landscape was left. Numerous severed limbs scattered about, the stench of blood in the air was so thick it could make you sick.
Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress
maybe bcs u have like 800,000,000,000 merits point m with literally the same stays as him
Maybe it's because I've become a person close to the President so she gives me special attention?
Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress
and litetally have the same status as him
Maybe it's because I've become a person close to the President so she gives me special attention?
Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress
madam su, bout to kick herself after finding this shi out
"The Confederate suddenly got another President out of nowhere… Fine, I also want to see, what kind of person he is"
Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress
she fr hating on the best son in law in the verse rn
The middle-aged woman also lost interest in making tea, coldly laughed and mumbled: "A toad dares to dream of walking on the clouds?"
Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress
so he made the right decision at least in the opinions of the system
[The user has chosen Soul Points, going one step closer towards becoming War God, please keep working hard]
Sci-fi · Flaming Fortress
what was homie doing in his past life
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Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon
real
Eren didn't blame anybody for that. He knew he was at fault for not taking hold of his life. He spent the days as easily and leisurely as he could without worrying about the future. And that had spiralled into something he couldn't easily get out of.
Fantasy · Grayback
the mistress better not be his mum or summin
"My husband has been getting worse lately. Last night he made love on our living room sofa in front of me and Olivia."
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
isn’t the lady that gave him the system a demon and part of them or diff organisation
'A demon joins the demon hunter association, just like a rabbit goes into lions' den.' Well, I'm not completely rabbit-like, since I can fight them. But still, join them is same as suicide for me.
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
free my guy
"Ah!" Jack cried because she slapped Jack again for no reason before following Michael into the nearby building.
Action · don_offl
honestly had quite a promising start but i’d say the drop off in quality is quite substantial. i’ve read the authors other works and they seem to all share the same problem of pacing, power scaling and character development. With my main gripe being the last point, too many times has Leonel reflected onto his past actions and makes a whole spiel about changing but never does and then he just keeps saying “he’s just a kid” as an excuse every single time. The romance itself is an issue, and this comes from a person who loves the genre but the interactions between leonel and fmc are not very interesting with pretty much zero chemistry between them.
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec