Hello, I liked your story, keep it up, it's very entertaining, although it would be good if you didn't do a time jump now and made a story about what Arata will do in those 2 years that he has left until he turns 7 and for the harem you can put a secret, mereoleona, mimosa, noelle and fana, as for noelle he can meet her while she is doing training to control her mana and he sees her and thinks about helping her and thus becomes interested in the mc
ch 0 5 chapter 5: meeting the vermillion family part 1/2
Anime & Comics · Thelostswordman
yes everyone, the question doesn't matter hahaha
ch 0 8 Beating Brawly
Video Games · GhostGirlLover68
I really think Apollo should have a weapon that can be both a sword and a bow because of his training with Hekate with those weapons and he once faced the snake that way.
ch 24 Chapter 24 - Goddess of the Forge
Anime & Comics · ExtraZ7
good chapter, will you upload fate chapters again?
ch 148 The Doll Asia
Anime & Comics · Pinto_sh
I agree, it's bad, right?
ch 77 A dead guy
Anime & Comics · Walmano
I like the idea above. Apart from that, you could also add Sarada and Sumire since she is quite cute after she changes.
ch 12 please read it's for the future of this book and it's good news
Anime & Comics · The_real_MC_
You should do it as you planned, after all it looks interesting
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I honestly see the mega ones could be interesting, as for the Z movements, the dynamax and gigantamax I see them as very unnecessary.
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I liked the story, could you tell me if it ends with all of them or just one? because I have read several stories and sometimes only ends up keeping one and leaving the others
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ahhh and that was it, no matter what happens, I'm not used to this type of writing but don't worry, no problem
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Or it could be because I don't speak English and I'm reading it by translation but this chapter is also the same, the dialogues are together and sometimes there are two dialogues from two different people together.
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I will only say that do not leave it, the story is good but chapter 2 when the god and his daughter speak is not very well understood since you wrote it all together and without mentioning who spoke of the two you had to guess
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His sister are also part of his harem later on?
ch 0 4 Grayfia R18
Anime & Comics · dog_2037
Good afternoon, will you make regular updates and where can I get this novel?
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que novela es esa?
Lección de vida número 1: No metas tu pene en una loca.
Anime & Comics · Bukaro
It could be too but how are you going to make her fall in love with the MC?
ch 0 5 chapter 5: meeting the vermillion family part 1/2
reincarnated as alucard in black clover
Anime & Comics · Thelostswordman