Webnovel Author: SmilesS - Novel Collection

I think this has some nice potential. Doesn't waste any time trying to pull you in. Gives a very mysterious vibe in how the initial buildup goes. I see alot of potential in this book the more I read through it

Stands out amongst alot of generic and dis-interesting tower or fantasy web-novels due to it's beginning and focus on being "dark". Most of the story flows well is neatly spaced and is easy to read. Avoids "rushing" the introduction. Only issues in between sentences are words that don't need to be there, or are unnecessarily "bulking" it and minor grammatical errors. World is relatively fresh given how early at the time this review is (Chapter 7) but hoping it will not devolve into generic tower replica. Novel has alot of potential to do well, just needs more frequent updates besides what was already said.

Novel has potential, but author struggles with grammar, pacing and proper usage of tenses at the time of writing. Paragraphs are very stuck together, many run on sentences or words inserted without a clear flow into them. Protagonist's mental thoughts and emotions at times come off as scattered and not as easy to follow, or the wrong word is being used to describe them. Can be a 5/5 if formatting + wording and tenses are cleaned up, along with more careful touches upon the protagonist and characters themselves.

Shameless Author self review time This is a satirical parody of most cultivation novels. Watch as our protagonist, Xing Wenghu hallucinates an entire past life! And uses his bizarre, unusual and totally not stolen from Manhua he read techniques to fight other idiots. I hope this story at-least gives you a chuckle.

A nice story, I hope it will contain many face slappings in it's future. The part that killed me was CH4 when Lin Zhang's father pissed on the bed. Just the way it came out so blatantly lol holy shit. Eager to see where this goes.

It's rather dark, but I like that. You make it stand out with it's dark humor, sad moments and how it flips in between. Overall I think this has alot of potential. Very gritty, and not in a bad way.

A nice read. I enjoyed how easy it was to follow along, things are written well and there is never a dull moment in the dialogue. Very promising, and I'm sure you will go far as you update further!

I enjoyed the casual characterization through description, the way you established brevity and tension quickly and smoothly at the same time. A rather good show all in all. I have a hard time believing this is your first novel in fact lol.

The Writing was quite a treat. I enjoyed the luxury of the succinct descriptions and very vivid usage of scenery to depict a rather intense image to the reader. Something you don't often find while browsing webnovels is that large "description". The authors smooth writing and transitioning from there only serve to make a comfortable reading experience. I would recommend this novel to anyone really.