SaeelAr

11mth

Posted

This story was great but a bit confusing as midway through the chapter count the author changes characters. Is this intentional or a mistake? This totally detracts the reader from the story as it breaks continuity.

Glory from the Ashes: The Legend of Amir the Footballer

Sports · said_alamri

SaeelAr

1yr

Commented

This chap actually made me emotional. Awesome writing

ch 633 Resonance of Principle!

Permanent Martial Arts

Eastern · Shadow on the Moon

SaeelAr

1yr

Commented

That fiend and the feeling of all those lives lost 😔😡

ch 632 Annihilate the Fiend!

Permanent Martial Arts

Eastern · Shadow on the Moon

SaeelAr

2yr

Commented

Why does this feel like foreshadowing? He practices in Barca then meets some players at the training facility, makes good contacts and finally with transfer there next season? 🧐

ch 307 Holiday Considerations