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It's a good novel. If you look past the obviously rushed first chapter, there's nothing terrible about it. Writing quality 5*- Apart from the first few chapters, the grammar is good. Even those first few chapters are better than a good majority of the novels I've read on here. Though the grammar could always improve, 5 stars, for now, seem appropriate. Stability of updates 5*- Simple. The author releases at least one chapter a day. Story development 5*- It's too early into the novel to really say but for now I think it's going in the right direction. Character design 5*- Is going in the right direction. The characters and their reactions are genuine enough for a work of fiction and I got nothing to complain about. I enjoy Johnathan and the other twos characters. I also like their powers. Again, I have nothing to complain about. World Background 4*- This is by far the worst thing in this novel. However, that's compared to everything I reviewed so far. The world-building isn't bad but so far nothing's really shown how the world changed since the start. But I can understand why nothings really been said. in the novel, not much time has passed. Around 1 or 2 days. Which isn't long at all. So I have hope that once more time passes, the author will explain how everything changed and focus more on world-building. So that is my review. I hope this is helpful to those who are hesitant or are debating on whether to read. It's a good novel, but it's a bit early to decide and give a definite score. However, everything said, I believe the novel is quite promising. With the small teasers the author gave in the beginning, I doubt it'll only be zombies. Overall, I say this novel is a 4.8. It could go up or down, but for now, I say it's a reasonable score. Thanks for reading, and Author, I hope you keep up the good work. I do suggest rewriting the first chapter and extending it so it's less rushed and more natural.

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