DaoistyBCprk

2yr

Posted

It's got great potential. A breath of fresh air compared to mainstream military novels, The first chapter has that thrill that immerses you into the character's world and is a great sign for more to come. It seems a little unpolished but the plot sees it through. i'm looking forward to more

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War · IronMike

DaoistyBCprk

2yr

Commented

It sounds illegal but isn't

"It could not have gone better. She and I are very compatible; maybe it is because we're related? Who knows... anyway, you might have some competition going forward. After all, Adela is now my lawful wife, and though she may be inexperienced, she is a quick learner."