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It´s unlikely the author would remove an ability like that, since he only implied that the energy is more potent than the stuff usualy used, and we know the demon lords, especialy Milim are not usual.

"Passed out after you..... named us." Evie explained noticing his confusion, she was fairly surprised that he could actually even wake up this fast after naming an Archdragon and giving away enough magicules to make it evolve to a Dragon King. What she didn't know was that he had the Dragon's Heart, a literal generator of refined magical energy far more potent than what this world was usually used to.

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T/O/W

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Author-san I do think C) is the best option because there you will have more time for development of relationships which I think is more important than more chicks in the Harem. I think you would have just so much more freedom to write when you choose c) since you’re not focused to get all chicks in love with MC but you would have time for your own elements to add to the story like you did with FGO. I do think that a small harem would be acceptable since it will be manageable to write for you and the relationships will be just that much better than those stupid story’s where the relationships are all over the place and nothing makes sense anymore because there are like then billion love interests.So i belive c) is the best choice for you author-san.

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I was surprised that you did come back to this FF after that long break but I do agree that you did have a progress in Writing Quality and if you want to redo your chapters I do find it acceptable and hope that you will keep your word and post Chapters after your done with your redo. I will be looking forward to your return! I hope I will hear from you soon.

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That line at the end though

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ch 355 If you want something, you need to take the initiative

I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo

I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo

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Thanks for the chapter author-san.

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Kotori and Kurumi I say these two because if you want the MC and Shido to be friends he will maybe leave some of the girls for Shido as a bro, but if you don‘t want them to be friends you can just add all of them or so. You‘re the author so you decide what you wanna write but this is just what I would enjoy. Still good FF anyway, for me it is important that the story will be good and from what you wrote till now I am confident that the story will continue to be great.

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