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Very good. Hate Su Lin anyway. Time to cuck him and take his leadership position

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"What is wrong with me, why I am getting upset over those words, I chose this life, I dont have to blame anyone for my condition," Alena whispered as she was standing down in the shower while closing her eyes, the water is dripping over her body and she is washing herself , but suddenly yohan's face appeared in front of her sight and the image of when he hugged her started flashing in front of her eyes, she suddenly remembers about that moment when she was with him inside the hundred poison valley sector, thinking about that moment her heart is started beating faster.

Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey

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"Then... might I propose an exchange? I take possession of Birmond's body, and in return, you're… you are granted custody of your nephew's remains?"

Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Fantasy · Grayback

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Replied to HIKARU_GENJI

Just want to leave this comment here since being an author is always an evolving process and I just wanted to let you know how I felt as a reader (I have stopped reading at end of volume 6) so when I first started reading I was really excited, honestly by the end of volume 5 I was so excited for what was going to happen, sae saw alot, how was he going to manage that? Where will things go will Natasha after the fight? The shuri arc is next too awesome Im excited to see where it ties to the prologue and how the interactions between the female MCs will be, Mc is growing in powers and will get more involved with Yui that’s dope! At the end of volume 5 I was sure I would love this novel, volume 6 however was far from what I expected, sae and Natasha disappear? not mentioned for 120 chapters? Shuri was like 5 of the total chapters? Why was volume 6 so long it felt incoherent and like there was no direction in the story, it felt like all the setup from volume 1-5 was completely abandoned. A random girl who death was used as a plot device got more charcter Development than the entire rest of the female cast. It was honestly unreal to me, as volume 6 dragged on I enjoyed it less and less, it felt like you don’t even really have an idea of the story is going to go ane you’re winging it lol. I’m honestly really dissapointed volume 1-5 we’re so good than we get a volume bigger than the whole rest of the book and it’s a total pivot from the first 5 volumes that made me engaged with the story.

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Long time HG reader, been reading his stories since hero king was around 105 chapters. I’ve had the opportunity to watch him evolve as a writer anyway heres my honest review. What I like: unique setting of paranormal meets normal society. Heavily researched religious & mythological ideas and influences in the story. Unique & Interesting power system. Things are very well described leaving a very complete feeling to each action taken. MC Is not a hero or villain just someone trying to do the best for people he cares about, which is very human. What I dislike: plot feels very slow with many description and large pools of information heavily impeding plot development. The prologue, first 30 chapters, foreshadowing and MCs job give you a feeling that there will be smut and harem relationship advancement when in reality there has been barely any in 300 chapters. (As a SHK reader this dIssapointed me quite a lot). I would understand if he choose to make this story less smutty and much less relationship focused but the way the first 30-60 chapters lead you to be excited about the relationship advancement & female MCs only for plot to be slow and relationship advancement almost non existent you feel kind of baited by the introduction and early chapters leaving dissatifaction with the plot progression. (Example author states vol 6 is supposed to be the arc of Female Mc X (no spoilers) yet 60 chapters in we haven’t even seen her) essentially getting your hopes up for relationship advancement only for it to be ignored most of the volume. Overall: this novel is still better than 95% of WNs don’t be mistaken. Just don’t go into this story excited hoping for fast plot, smut and relationship advancement, or you will be like me and be dIssapointed everytime you read more chapters and nothing happens that you’re expecting. //Lotus

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