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Oye te voy a decir lo que me parece la historia hasta el momento es que la idea en si esta muy buena pero luego la narración es media ya que solo está en primera persona y no cambia de primera persona, y que no llegas a separar los pensamientos de los párrafos por ejemplo esto sería un ejemplo, Arata iba andando por la acera de camino al parque para jugar al fútbol mientras pensaba `Um hoy voy a entrenar regates y disparos más tarde´pensaba Arata mientras tenia una mirada pensativa. Aparte puedes escribir los gestos que podría hacer el personaje.
ch 0 2 The Kid Arc
Rebirth In Blue Lock With The Biggest Talent
Anime & Comics · Nesszera
Moreeeeeee. This FanFiction is too good sorry english IS no mi first lenguaje
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Douluo dauluo la leyenda del rey dragón
This is the plant?
As the kid walked towards a hill while the sun wasn't completely out, he saw a boy laying down on a smooth rock with a weed in his mouth while he just lazed around. <not the drug or the plant it gets created from, I just couldn't find the word for that plant>
Majesty's Journey 7: Bibi Dong's Omnitrix Wielder In Douluo Dalu
Anime & Comics · That_One_Dead_Ali
i don't understand, i am spanish
"MOTHERFUCKER!" To which both Brock and my pokemon burst out laughing.
Pokemon: A champions journey
Anime & Comics · Ashley_Ketchum44
'The Origin of Us (Volume- I)' Harry read the title inside his mind as he pulled out the book from the shelves. This was one of the books his mom asked him to read and like a good boy, he will listen to his mom. After all, he would rather die than disappoint her.
Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
Movies · InGlorious
'I wanted....to be a cute princess'
Trap Lannister Legendary Swordsman
TV · Jade_beauty_tits
Oye los indonesios (o como se diga lo siento si ofende a alguien) no podían comer vaca debido a que era un animal sagrado y eso del cerdo no serian los musulmanes que tenían prohibido comer cerdo
"Okay, there's a restaurant that served delicious beef steak just across the street. We can have our dinner there."
Dimensional Merchant
Anime & Comics · amethystore
Verdad yo te apoyo
And for those who claim the bible, and such, were written by your gods, well you'd think a god would have better grammar, half the words in the bible are the word 'and'.
(COMPLETE) A Murder Wizards Adventures
Anime & Comics · Bored_MC
Lo siento pero voy a dejar de leer esta historia no sé bien cómo explicarte por qué no me gusta pero hay algunos agujeros de trama y también no me gusta esto de los planes para prácticamente esclavizar a alguien y eso si se que eso suena como una excusa y yo también lo creo en algunas historias me gusta que hagan eso pero en esta no tanto gracias por tus esfuerzos escritor-san
ch 46 Contract with Charlotte.
Heavenly God Technique in Douluo Dalu
Anime & Comics · HeavenlySpaceDrago
Un dia despues dia de el examen
[𝕺𝖓𝖊 𝖉𝖆𝖞 𝖑𝖆𝖙𝖊𝖗... 𝔻𝕒𝕪 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔼𝕩𝕒𝕞]
MHA: Air Supremacy
Anime & Comics · FleemusDesirus
Kyosuke's other tablemate, Yuan Ye Lin, looked at Kyosuke with big watery eyes and smiled while covering his mouth.
I'm In Konoha: Uchiha's God Of Taijutsu
Anime & Comics · GoudaGenji
He is officially become Rank 35 after waiting for 2 months. Nie Long doesn't know how Tang San can increase his rank from Rank 20 something to Rank 90 something in 8 years.
Heavenly God Technique in Douluo Dalu
Anime & Comics · HeavenlySpaceDrago
The main question I wanted to ask about was, which house should our main character go to? At the moment I struggle between every house except Gryfindor so it would be nice to hear your opinion which of the three houses Slytherin, Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff you prefer.
Harry Potter: The bored Prodigy
Movies · Riri_san
Harry potter no? Animales fantasticos y donde encontrarlos
He read all the information he could about spirit beasts and where to find them(pun intended😂).and what saddens him the most is that as the time pass he could see the end of the spirit master profession coming to an end if the humans don't find any solution in the future.
douluo dalu 2:ascension of the holy god of creation
Anime & Comics · Yahya_Talai