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bruhhh. I really had to break my review and comment them

tf is wrong with wn comment and reply section????

overall:- this is a slow and progressive story going in the right direction. as some ppl likes to call themselves veterans (basically edgy, like me), it maybe not be for them in the beginning, but it does gets better (maybe some can give it a try now that it's close to 200 chapters). and as some also said:- it IS great for those who just started reading novels, basically those that didn't get tainted by the poisonous stuffs all over this platform.

this needed extra attention, writing:as author is clearly a noob in writing, he has the usual mistakes of spelling sometimes, punctuation mistakes and some phrase mistakes. but overall it's good. unlike the unreadable or mtl lookalike ones being delivered by most current new self-proclaimed authors in this platform ............

tfwhere did my spaces go?bruh

after 55 chapterMc is a literal Saint, who even forgives his enemies and make friends with them.the side characters are pretty average with a constant upgrade in their depth.Mc is a nerd and academic intellect, rather than having practical experience considering he lives in a strength rule world.tho his intelligence is growing, unlike those 999999999 IQ MC's who does retarded dumb shit along with their author.the world background is being properly built upon, rather than just doing the info dump we get in almost all new novels.MC's powers are justifiable with requirements and technique, rather than just shouting a word and squirting water from anywhere. while Author's writing is readable and ok, he does make some pretty small mistakes in grammar and spelling. I kind of like the system part of this novel, as it was made by humans rather then some ROB or some dumbass higher being parasiting it inside the mc and mc has no clue how it came to be. love how the author explains the systems designing days in between anyway, good writing good luck and keep improving yourself