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I don't know... For me, this reminds me of the Narrator from "Darkest Dungeon".

Not healing a character and then having it die by two crits is not something that you can easily forget... 

DxD: Ink and summoning

DxD: Ink and summoning

Anime & Comics · LaYEn

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"knife"? I'm pretty sure he used a gun... Also, cold dude.

He put the knife away and went back to the bathroom just in time to see the downloading finish.

MHA: A Cat's Story

MHA: A Cat's Story

Anime & Comics · WolfStar14

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I'm not sure if you particularly care, but in this paragraph "waste" should be "waist". Other than this and a few other small grammatical stumbling blocks, I've been enjoying this story so far. I'm curious to see where it goes.

I heard another weird scream and saw the source. It was a person clothed fully in rags. A black tattered dress with a dirty sash wrapped around the waste. The person wore a cloak over this, which flailed behind them, as their hands were stretched forward with a staff in hand. This staff had a certain jewel at one of its end.

My Reincarnation as a Chicken

My Reincarnation as a Chicken

Fantasy · Rados47

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