- 0 d Continuous Writing
- 2.4 h of Reading
- 9 Read books
Lady_Azzura
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Moments 3
So, I think this is very thought provoking anf very well written. I am just a bit confused by the areas in the start of each chapter. It has numbers and statements. I am lost as to why they are there and often it takes me a few minutes to read before giving up and moving unto the actual story. Again the actual story is very compelling and requires time to digest what has been read. I just wish I would not get distracted by the starting statements of the chapters.
ch 0 4 Paper Towns.
Morphing Iniquity
Teen · Tailrs ink
So I read from Chp 1-5. First, I think like others have said, grammerly or grammer apps would help here. As for the story, it's such an interesting concept and I cant wait to see how the characters develop in this setting. However, the story seems to jump around a bit and made it a bit hard to read. I thought the little boy was Aknuza until it was said that he needed to fight Aknuza.
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Fantasy · Arif_207
I do love this books far. However, the charecter almost comes off not real at times because at a young age he knows so much. But I understand that is part of his upbringing and makes sense in this setting. A solid read and I will deff come back for more as more chapters are out. I love the internal monologue!
Youth World
Sci-fi · Alexanderctn