Writing Quality: No mistakes Stability of Updates: Seems like once a day but the words for the second chapter don't seem consistent with the first chapter. Not sure if it's done deliberately. Story Development: I like the genre of the story and where it seems to be going. I love store owner stories and the potential journey through different layers spices up the story for me more. Character Design: I am liking it so far. World Background: Massive...I enjoy such backgrounds!
Fantasy · M_gm
Good Beginning!
ch 0 1 Immortal Drink - Winemaster System
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Writing Quality: No mistakes Stability of Updates: Seems like once a day but the words for the second chapter don't seem consistent with the first chapter. Not sure if it's done deliberately. Story Development: I like the genre of the story and where it seems to be going. I love store owner stories and the potential journey through different layers spices up the story for me more. Character Design: I am liking it so far. World Background: Massive...I enjoy such backgrounds!
Immortal Drink
Fantasy · M_gm