I'm just an amateur writer who likes to read. I have no prior knowledge of writing mechanics other than literature class in High school.
Chapters are way too short, these must be about 500-600 words. Standard chapters are 2000 words
ch 11 A Trial of Learning
Fantasy · jdbeue
Great Concepts and a rather unique take on the genre, unfortunately dropped when the author was picking up a head of steam. Still enjoyable while it lasted though.
Fantasy · amazingfabs
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Chapters are way too short, these must be about 500-600 words. Standard chapters are 2000 words
ch 11 A Trial of Learning
The Golden Throne
Fantasy · jdbeue