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bro i want to ask you something. didn't sakura say that the only one who is alowed to see her real self is the oc but why does she still post her photo's in internet.

I finaly read through all the chapter's and this is the beat story of your's this story have good balance of powers then your other storyes like your danmachi oc mc is too much i don't like him but this cote oc mc is very good plz don't make him like other author mc who gets revealed when that mc killed a store clurk when he help sakura.

Thanks for this chapter but bro 4 month's without posting any chapter i was about to give up hope on this fic because i am new here i stared to read this fic when you were in 3th month of absences but thanks for being here and plz finish this fic i wantto see Synthia and the oc plz.

it has been a while bro and thanks for this chapter.

even if the mc saves the day i will be fealing emty and hurt no matter what happens now.

plz more chapters.

yes i don't know about other readers but i do. Thanks for the chapter

good chapter the best of this story yet.

hello there author you shood change the 100 times boost to 10 times and that rasengan and thunder god boost to be 100 times because it will be more believable when you showed the power of 1000 times power of the rasengan it was under walming it was too little of a power bost i say it won't be even 100 times it is that week to be 1000 times so plz change it and you shood change the extra power rasengan that you gave to the oc to change and be the rasengan that dark naruto used in a movie where obito use a item it poot them in a world genjutsu. lower the cost of the rasengan and give him a tail beast rasengan plz. if you have time plz change this little things and this story will be greate i love you story but you rush to much in righting and miss small things like that.

this story isen't really that good because it doesn't have many imotional moments but you force it anyways like that naruto moment where he was about fight sasuke. You made naruto sound like a dumass with that cringe words it was like you skip 100 chapters of emotional bonding. this wood have been good if you have more chapters with naruto and oc bonding like student amd teacher and also you shood not copy to much DBZ because it feals weard in narutovers like that speach. Also you shood name the fighting style because it sounds wrong here. Plz continu the other story.

plz contimu this story i like it.

good chapter but too many gramer mistakes.

thanks for the chapter but it seams like you are forcing the oc to be in this story i like the power up's you giving to the oc but the story doesn't feal natural so plz try to make the things he do natural like any reincarnations wood have done. And your story is kind of reapating the samething from the oc point of view so plz keep that in your mind and try to change the story or make oc do any thing other then reapting in his mind what he is seeing.

i dont'k know what to say man but stay strong i really like your's story and i will be waiting for it.

thanks for the chapter 10 but it was mid.