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ah, I know about her.Me and my friends always joke about why do villains keep having children and somehow their plot also involving them to be kind, completely different from their parents.And thank you for your reply.Yes, I intend to add my own new characters and MC personal rivals / enemies that's not related or from Marvel DC. Perhaps some new race as well, if story progression and situation allow me to.
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i am sorry but i couldn't get what you mean.
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😂Haha, thank you for commenting.But yea, for now it will be just a mentioning period. Since DC in Marvel universe are also considered as comic and entertainment for the heroes.But more mention will come in the future chapters Be sure to check in and stay tuned
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Thanks for the review Initially, it will be confusing for MC power and background but it will all be explained later in each hero's story arc.
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Yes it does.But spoiler, the hammer was not controlled by the enemy magnetism but rather it was overwritten by changing the rightful ownership. More akin to the hammer was brainwashed.
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Sorry, seems like there's issue of uploading images on my side. Originally I wanted to share 2D illustration arts but keep getting CORS blocked error.
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Not gonna lie This chapter is arguably my worst chapter. Because I felt the Prologue Arc had dragged for too long so I decided to end it quick and in a rush. I do admit there's too much visible plot hole or questionable event and this chapter is the third draft that I felt more smooth than previous two draft that failed horribly. I "convinced" myself by mentioning since the heroes have no concrete evidence to prove he's an enemy spies and a lot of it were just baseless accusations because Dr.Strange started it. Plus even Phil had monitored and viewed every recorded footage of him yet still found no proof saying he's on enemy side. Even if using the words brainwashed or mind controlled that means every one in the earth might be suspected as standing with the enemies. But overall yeah, I feel that this chapter is a rushed product.
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Thank You! Do comment more in the future too. I am glad to accept constructive criticism.
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Yes, I use armored ultra as original ultra. It allow me to create more ideas for the ultra to change into new form by describing how the armor on it body move into the form it need
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Inspired with Dyna but with a more armored version like the cover art.
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Thank You. I hope the mysterious and interesting plot will keep on attracting you and other fellow readers in the future.
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Thank You. I am glad my story is suit to your liking. I could only write something a bit light and shallow since it's my beginning novel and concern on if too complicated will confuse the read. I will be adding more mysterious plot in the future.
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Hi, Thank You for your review. Your comment is a huge motivation booster. Yes, the work is highly inspired by the Witcher series. Hope you will keep on following my works. And sorry for the lack of updates recently, work getting the best of me and hard to find time to write.
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Hi, sorry for the late reply and update. Works been keep me busy. Yes, the story is highly inspired by Witcher. Thanks for reading
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Thanks for the questions, I should clarifiy more in the story.When I wrote, my mind was thinking of this scenario on why he only began to learn piloting jet. It's the first time MC is on earth, in all his previous life, he do got pilot 'jets' but it's more alien or advance. Different system and different control panel force him need to relearn things that's similar The multiverse that I meant for MC, is not that him is from always from earth but probably on a light years planet far away from earth. But it still count as a single universe, and for as we able to know, our milky way already consist at least 800 million planets. I apologize for the misleading. To simplify, It's the first time MC landed into Earth after all those times battling his archenemies in a rather different civilizations than of ours.