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Idk why people think this is a good fic but I can't help but disagree. In my honest opinion it's a below average quality fic which degrades the original ideas, not an upgrade so to speak. Minato's talents are nerfed so much so that he probably matches upto "Academy level obito" right now. The training decisions are totally brain-dead. The devil fruit ability is a place holder text to increase word count, serves no purpose at all. It's making mockery of Naruto and One Piece at the same time. And the character lack any sort of depth. I mean the author really tried, the effort can be seen but the execution is mediocre at best.
ch 23 Chapter 23 - First Year 14.
Naruto - Minato Namikaze SI
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
Brother, he's a slave now. Thoroughly enjoying his happily ever after rotting away in slavery and in delusions of grandeurs of power and glory. TF you talking about OPness? You're right about him having OP powers but you didn't take into account about how moronic he can be... It pretty much cancels out all those OP powers.
This book has been deleted.
Maybe the Author has a torture fetish?
At this point Ariel was going in an out of consciousness because of the pain, He couldn't even think a single thought as his sanity was chipped away bit by bit.
Divine General Mahoraga in Shadow Slave
Anime & Comics · The_oneandonly344
Well, from my observation if you're goal is to get into any of those top ranks then the main key would be consistency... On this platform, if you're uploads are consistent then it doesn't really matter if the story is mediocre, you can thrive and even monetize it. But that aside, as a working individual myself I understand. Can't really give up the job that pays the bills. I am in the same boat afterall.
But I am an adult, I do not call myself Uncle Author just because I am a fan of Uncle Roger well mostly. I have bills to pay and have responsibilities. I do not get paid for for writing, as a matter of fact I doubt that anyone would paid for something I write, I like what I write well mostly... stupid chapter 4. I have not as many reads, comments and reviews as other fanfiction, hell when I post a chapter I do not even reach the top 200 on any category.
Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.
Anime & Comics · Stuckinapileofbook
So much wasted time and so much wasted chapters...
ch 0 9 I Plunge To My Torment...
Reborn as Hades In PJO
Book&Literature · TheGreekMythosGuru
Another one bites dust, even before reaching New World... and people ask why I don't like when they expand upon the Yggdrasil Gaming arc...
ch 44 Exploring The Base of Ainz Ooal Gown - 3
Overlord: The Path of Sin
Anime & Comics · AzazelGrim
No no no. Do it only once more with Zeus 🌚 That's all I ask for.
(Let it be known. This is most likely going to be an end of the edginess as I myself I'm not a fan of gratuitous violence, but it felt the most fitting.)
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
I mean I definitely don't see the appeal now after that explanation but you do you mate.
ch 24 A Witch's Instruction Of A Spear Boy Part 3
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
Keep it short and simple. Would say 2 but it's dxd so let's go with 3.
ch 24 A Witch's Instruction Of A Spear Boy Part 3
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
Get him any number of years of "training", just summarize it in 2 or 3 chapters. Coz getting training time is a rare occurence and one should pack as much as one can during these times imo. But as readers we don't really want to read 'same-ish" chapters for more than 5 chapters. So, getting done with it in 2-3 chapters would be optimal.
(I will try to keep the training arc short, but if you guys desire otherwise, let me know.)
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
Hercules method, absolutely yes. Martial arts and Skills? He already has more than enough upgradable ones I think. Just taking them to the peak would be more than enough for most of the verses (except for Eldritch ones and Warhammer 40k 🙂).
ch 17 Another Enemy For A Spear Boy?
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
Nah, Humanity for the win. Sacred Gear was meant for humans to use. True Longinus user being human is even more poetic. He already has Zenkai. And he can create new skills and powers, he needn't get bloodlines imo. Get him something like Marvel mutants powers. Idk if Reality Marbles from Fate, count as skills or tools. But there are a lot of great ones there.
ch 17 Another Enemy For A Spear Boy?
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
Time to make more orphans eh? For the Greater Good ofcourse.
"Oh, you're truly born to be a wizard. Wool's Orphanage always produces some geniuses," Dumbledore exclaimed. Of course, the next sentence was just a mutter to himself and not meant for others to hear.
Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
There might, there might not. But most likely there are reasons(coz you're not really amateur at writing) and they might be good in their own right. But again, I personally don't like to see crippled MCs. I know it's too much to ask for but I like them with their limbs intact. It's a personal fault I guess but it is what it is. Although I wouldn't be able to continue but it was great while it lasted. I was invested and curious throughout the whole thing. For that you have my thanks. Good luck in your writing journey.
ch 33 A Gathering of Heroes
ASOIAF: Dimensional Chat Group
Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
What's with authors loving Cripple MCs these days. It started so great but you just had to permanently cripple the MC. For what? Just to show that he's weak. It achieved the purpose well and for that I applaud you but from this point I can't really enjoy the story anymore(it's a matter of personal preference I guess)
ch 33 A Gathering of Heroes
ASOIAF: Dimensional Chat Group
Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
Blood of the First men, at first glance sounds cool but tbh feels a bit redundant. HP magic and FMA Alchemy on the other hand would be really cool to see! But most importantly I would like to see his spear combat improve and be used in some huge wars. Personally I'd also like for his Longinus to get an upgrade to become "Longinuslanze Testament" somehow... ;)
I apologize if any of you are disappointed with this knowledge. But do feel free to let me know any recommendations you all feel for the story like where could go to the future or any worlds after the DXD parts are finished.
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
My man, you've a pretty extensive piece. I've added it to my library but unfortunately I don't have as much time these days. I like what I've read so far but it hasn't been much. But the review will be a bit late, till I catch up to the latést one.
Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.
Movies · Saintbarbido