Again this is just for reference hehehe, please don't mind the background thank you.
She has a pretty, calm face. As for the age, I can only guess is that she is older than me but not that old of an adult. She has a light colored skin and she looks very slender, her hair is white as snow and her eyes are both pale yellow. And her lips is pink.
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Just for reference hehe, please do not mind the background.
Next after that was a small girl with black and blue eyes being kicked from behind falling to floor in front of me.
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Ohh I see now Thank you very much I will make the revision a new book so I will leave the old chapter here.
ch 0 6 A short talk with the girl and the goddess.... --------------------------------------
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hehehe
I don't have those kind of things since well.... I'm just a doll... so basically I'm flat.
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she is between a golem and undead, so she is very unique, her body is that of a doll/golem but she have her own sense of reasons so she is not bound to an oder like an typical golem, She is a unique kind of monster hehehe
ch 45 A normal morning 2......
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Fufufu, Thank you for reading my story, I've been reading your comments as you read my story all throughout. Regarding the dirt on the dolls joint, She could be slightly be hindered by it, but using her cleanse magic and of course batting, that dirt could be easily removed. Well, How did you liked my story so far? are there parts that made you unsatisfied or like left hanging. If there is anything please hesitate to tell me, I gladly appreciate it hehehe.
ch 45 A normal morning 2......
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hello there hehehe. I'm very sorry about the mistake, I also didn't noticed it when I was writing it before. Her age is twelve hehehe. Thank you for reading my story,
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it's their relationship after all hehehe~~
ch 36 The capital visit (2)...... --------------------------------------------------
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yes hehehe~
ch 0 2 A talk with the goddess... --------------------------------------
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thank you it's fixed hehehe
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thank you for the feedback, I have read about your concern about my usage of periods. I've been writing the story like that for the past year and didn't get any concerned about it until now hehehe, thanks for telling me. I will try to adjust it now. About the grammatical however, I'm still studying about it so you might encounter a lot of them in the story. thank you for reading hehehe馃榿~
ch 0 1 A unknown place..... --------------------------------------
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XDDD
"Is Edith-san not having fun with me?."
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ohh thxxxx 鉂わ笍
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I will explain it on future chapters hehehe
hehehe thx~~ English is really difficult but still trying to improve 馃榿馃榿
ch 28 Encounter (2)..... --------------------------------------------------
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there will be a chapter heheheh~
ch 0 4 The Rescue (2) --------------------------------------------------
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A reference for Aria's appearance hehe thxxxx
She has shining gold eyes and a long straight golden hair. A motherly face outline.... And a gentle smile.....
Reincarnated as a doll [Revised]
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