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Thanks for the chapter man. It's good to finally see a fanfic with such high quality writing and storytelling. And the consistency makes it even better, unlike most fanfics out there. 😌👍😍Though, just like any other book I've read, I hate the clif-hangers👺.

Please don't drop this my guy 🙏. Many people have been waiting for a decent star wars fanfic that doesn't have the MC wishing for some gacha wish fill fullment system.

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I don't get it, he said that he won't be a hero or a saint, but that's exactly what he is doing?

ah finally, after three months of constantly checking of there is a new chapter everyday, there finally is one

you should've stuck with one piece for a while, then with fairy tale you as you were doing already, just continue the cannon just making a few differences here and there, until some big change happens due to the butterfly effect caused by the presence of MC. Carry only the story by adding you own scenes, then find an end in the fairy tail world. transport MC to another world again with a similar magic system, but more powerful. this way he will get more powerful to get to his goal.

dude honestly it would have been a killer one piece fanfic

where is the kunlun qi techniques?

why didn't she just regress him before he used his brothers VR Pod?

God, I hate Chinese novels, I though I could stomach this a while longer since it's a fanfic on my favourite anime, but the mannerism of the comprehension and vocabulary always turns me off when it comes to Chinese made novels.

I NEED to read more of this fantastic fanfic.

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i hate his personality already. he is the type to believe that the world is all sunshine and rainbows. if it weren't for his knowledge of being in the marvel universe, he would have just been some rich hippie mob, thinking that he can save the world, and stop all world hunger, strife and famine, by using his fathers tech company.

a lot of the writing contains an enormous amount of redundancy. certain gestures of a characters should be left to the reader's imagination rather than writing every single thing happening. Or rather there is too much filler content.

how he hasn't practised his power yet still surprises me. one thing about Peter Parker is that despite getting powers is that he never trained and now MC is doing the same. And also how is he not training or anything because the future isn't going to be great if it happens.

I don't know about others, but I feel like he basically ruined the novel by including this System thing. There is too much of it already, and you even chose the least creative type of system. Interest in this book could've peeked if you hadnt. If you got rid of the system and somehow made a wish to know of how much progress you are in the power you have, like cultivation, then it would've been great. But now it's not even a Zeta man fanfic anymore. It's more like some monsters fanfic, because with the system you'll just take out everything that would make his power from the Zeta-man universe.