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this is a direct copy paste of fanfiction REVOLUTION

wtf is wrong with these people...i mean 6 years old MC behaving like pedo...he is just sparring with a bunny but also thinking about the soft feel of her legs..are all Chinese authors are horney pedo?...every female character is written just for sex purposes and nothing else..

Is there any novel where we can at least read the story without any mention of sex every chapter...i mean MC is only 2 years old and is thinking about fucking his own mother..grow up dudeWhat is even the meaning of rebirth if he can't focus on his priorities...at least become an adult then pursue these things and stop thinking on fkng 8 yrs old girls

Best novel I've read so far which combines one piece and Naruto...

writing is good..story is developing nice different from canon...there is no grammatical mistake or any unreadable contentone major problem is long winded content...there are many redundant lines...

Writing quality is ok...flow could have been betterMain problem is character of MC...i mean it is the same problem with all Chinese...after transmigration they starts to show off without considering long term incidence even if they were average in their previous life...it is their inferiority complex that ruin the novels...

Have to say one thing no country is better in brainwashing than China...i mean MC died and is now European but no he is a "standard yellow Chinese in white skin" in his own words...we get it you are patriotic but dude you are dead and now got a new start so stop licking ass...Now novel content is standard football.. nothing new...but better for passing timeMC is now head coach and doing consecutive wins for the team.. don't know how

Good quality novel...pacing is fast which is very very good... we've already read so many novels in which MC takes around 50 chapters for just academy graduation...here in this novel in only 16 chapters he is born and now facing Konoha crush..But there are some problems too... system is jsut for name sake and nerfed badly...apart from MC his friends and family there's no mention of any other characters...it just shows that there is only MC in his own small world...MC has also very tunnel focused kind of personality...he is living in ninja village so he could at least try to learn some skills from them but no he only trains based on either canon knowledge or system

One of the best novel I've ever read..WQ..it is well written and story flow is good..there isn't any problem in reading SD...All aspects are considered properly..story is fast paced and there aren't any plot holes..novel is dropped by author now as MC is already in the big league and can take control of all the problems...until unless multiverse is brought there won't be any use of MC taking any action CD...MC is pragmatic and considers all factors before taking actions..has long term planning...uses his power efficiently....MC is dealing behind the shadows as he doesn't want the fate to be angered..other characters are also well portrayedUS.. well novel is dropped for many years WB...fully exposed the Marvel world..MC travels the universe time to time..he also developed a planet for his base...

Some grammatical errors otherwise good... concept is good than the no killing nonsense in DC .... story is fast paced which is good...if the author wants to drag the story for more chapters he can continue the story as it is...but as MC has become lot more stronger than the justice league members he should let go of his constraints and interfare more with the world situation...he can also kill villains without superpowers discreetly or control the earth from shadows and light both

Concept is good.... writing quality is also good.. I've read only 20 chapters till now but i can't because there are several flaws...1. MC not taking control of his situation..he woke up and since then going with the flow2. MC not having any goal or ambition clearly 3. Dialogues are very bland.. there's no fluidity 4. It's bloody Marvel and for 20 chapters in the novel he spent his time chasing skirts... it's like reading a dating novel or reading Twilight

I read in one other fanfiction that they were both slowly gengutsu'd by either danzo or obito...this was to create further opportunities for these villains..

Quantity of writing is good...i don't know if it's translation or original but doesn't matter.. Better synopsis.. MC is editing Marvel and DC characters videos and uploaded them on multiverse app which opened in front of both heroes and anti-hero..but MC himself doesn't know that..till 18 chapters.. These characters will use these videos as past and future reference to help themselves.. one problem is that just like Chinese novels there are some things in this novel..like if video show something then these characters will start talking for an entire paragraph..you will know when you start reading it.. novel concept is better than the other Marvel novels as videos just show characters info not giving them rewards..i mean in one novel i read one mmarvel character getting chakra fruit.. that's just destroying any power system of the universe

everything's great but it's like I'm reading Chinese translation...i mean rather than using simple words author is using complicated words...novel flow is not good

one of the best HPxMCU fanfiction I've read so far

one of the best novel I've read so far... everything is great except world building.. author should put some ideas about the world in between chapters..till now there's only mention of one city..also history of humanity and monsters should also be explained

so much monologue..so much unnecessary info.. repetition of many lines... if above things can be improved then story will become more fluent and more interesting..