Cosmic_Crisis - Profile

Im happy to report this book is really good! The fact that the scheduled next chapters keep me from being a lunatic checking back every hour to check for more chapters, which is nice. like the story, like the characters, overall a great read 👍. if I had to find a flaw, I'd say the world hes in doesn't make a lot of sense sometimes, but they rarely do, so it doesn't keep me from enjoying the story. keep up the great work!

It has potential, but I have to drop it before chapter 10 due to the insane amount of repeating itself the book does. And unfortunately, because it repeats itself so much the story pacing is beyond slow and difficult to read. I do like the system so far and the MC, but with such slow pacing I cant justify reading it at this point. Hopefully the author does some rewrites because the story itself has been enjoyable. Best of luck author!

Oh boy, this is a good one, folks. The main character is a badass who isn't a total jerk and is very likable (mostly), but I'll get to that in a minute. My main point of enjoyment in this story so far is how the main character is written. His growth is fast but not ridiculous, and the author is doing a great job making sure things don't get too easy too fast. Even so, he still manages to be badass and make the story really interesting. it makes the pacing feel just *muah* chefs kiss. Towards the later stages of the released story there are some time jumps that feel a little rushed, personally id like to see some more of what happened between with some shorter time jumps, but thats a very minor issue for me as it seems like those wont be super common. The main concern I have is the frequency of dating and "romantic" scenes so far with random women he just meets. So far this MC is easy to root for but from past reading experiences this kinda writing is "harem but not a harem" territory which I really hope it doesnt spiral into, as I appreciate him having a strong moral compass up to this point. Overall, it was great work, and I'll continue to break out the credit card to buy any chapters you release.

if you haven't read anything, why are you rating it 1 star? 😂

Of course! I really appreciate the effort and very obvious passion you put into the writing, and im excited to see where the story will go from here! I totally expect to see this as one of the greats on the platform, and wish you the best!