The story is good and i can feel the characters emotions and what they are going though,the paces of the story is not bad and it could need some workto it.Some of the scenes where great but others where bit lacking but the overall the the story is not bad
Fantasy · jordiMaverick_bW
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The story is good and i can feel the characters emotions and what they are going though,the paces of the story is not bad and it could need some workto it.Some of the scenes where great but others where bit lacking but the overall the the story is not bad
(Failure number 9)
Fantasy · jordiMaverick_bW