you're a kid bro you can't say that, or the interdimensional FBI will hear you
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*but
'Thirsty ass MILFs'
Anime & Comics · Damaine_N
cringe
The weak are obligated to obey the strong. That is how things work in this world.
Anime & Comics · BruhGodKing
yes
So, question is, do YOU want a rewrite?
Movies · Unholy_Angel
It is cool, I mean I think you used original ideas like Black Tech Internet System, Game Creator in Marvel, Marvel Game Maker The Writing Quality is fine no grammar mistakes or anything of the sort (4/5) Stability of updates is good but you did take a break that is understandable but I'm dropping the score a bit (3/5) Story Development wise is a bit bad it was too fast and you should let the characters develop more. You should add more time and description for the characters like "Oh! my me so water negates fall damage" Make them discover what they found and make them interested. I know it's the beginning but you should add more interest to the viewers to pull the in. (3/5) Character Design is bad it looks rushed and 2 dimensional, you should let the characters explain what their feeling a bit in detail and exaggerate it way more after all they are anime and movie characters. Make the characters a bit different but still staying true to the original shows just to add a little spice and you should also make them talk more to make the conversation longer and more thoughts to the characters I think it's a bit short. (2/5) I think there is a lot of potential you have the multiverse an infinitely more versatile story. Don't be afraid to learn and experiment and take more advice from others and have fun with what your doing, after all it is a fanfic something to fulfil some lonely bastards and the imaganation all locked up in your brain wanting to let loose. I hope you get better at writing
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dude you really don't have to force yourself. i'm kinda starting to feel bad, you really shouldn't write a Fanfic for everyone at your own mental and physical expense. You should probably take a rest when you need, to even if when your fully recovered. You probably shouldn't take risks, so I guess you wouldn't listen to a stranger. Whatever I hope you get well soon. Best of Wishes... I guess
ch 48 Im alive, but not ok
Movies · NunuXD
basically don't write fanfics go take your time and grieve and study for YOUR future (you don't wanna end up homeless) and take your time to build relationships friends, family, and lovers alike You have a life, so does everybody. Don't waste it, cause you need a miracle if you do.
I love you guys <3
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
dude stop posting your uncle died. You should take a rest not write a fanfic. You should NOT post fanfics and SHOULD go to your family for comfort or something. You're not in the right state of mind to write things about killing and many things (I'm not going to specify). ALWAYS take a rest when needed, cause one day when you don't have the energy, when other people does or say something you don't like, you just snap your mind like a twig, trust me when I say it's really easy
I love you guys <3
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
Sorry I was a little angry. To be honest that was uncalled for. But I will not let you harm the respect of these masterpieces (pfft what respect am i saying you were saying it on a literal fanfic you weren't harming anything). Sorry again
"Instead of eradicating the enemy down to its roots. The protagonist underestimates his enemies at the beginning. Waiting for them to make plans against him and hurt his loved ones, only then will he act on his emotions which will trigger character development."
Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
hiouly schmoly you should probably rest instead of writing a fanfic
Basically concussion and my hands are injured because car accident haha yes. Good news though, they've mostly healed. I think. Well I mean it doesn't hurt to use my phone anymore sooooooo new chapter soon? Idk. Who's keeping track at this point.
Anime & Comics · TheOtakuGod
cool...................................................................................................................................................
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Anime & Comics · AaA_AaA