Respected Author, Kinesis I recall NYX shouting at the face of an idiot something like "They were innocent!?" And now I see them discussing how he was framed! Even in the previous chapter, that Female lead godess said "And you accepted all the blame?" but I didn't think much of it. Now, even if I didn't know this earlier; I could bet my 'proof reader' career that this is your first work. I'm really disappointed with this story. It had so much potential, but with every chapter, I doubt if the story will actually success. I'm sorry to say but if this keeps up, I might drop reading it. P.S. It seems that you still don't have a copyeditor. Have you had one, those major mistakes would've been taken care off in time. Yours truly, Shaman
ch 0 8 8: The Reason
Fantasy · kinesis
Not satisfied anymore. Right after the first few chapters. ................................ ................................ ................................ ................................ (Filling character reqs.)
The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life
Fantasy · kinesis