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Dad is at peak Sword king, it’s revealed later tho
"First of all, all swordsmen In ascending order are Novice-Apprentice-Swordsman-Knight-Expert-Sword Master-Sword King-Sword Saint-Sword God-Sword Transcendent-True Swordsman-Armament Celestial-World Blade-Crowned Sword. Each level has control over a different evolution of the energy swordsman use called Aura." He explained.
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
True, I thought it was clear that John wanted to act freely without his immortality being exposed. I’ll elaborate
"That means its coming at us! We need to split up and find it!" I said.
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
All in all, John has never been weak, he was someone wallowing in grief and [Cold Heart] took that from him and forced him to find himself, something that he’s still doing. Once he’s set, his flaws will be clear and he’ll grow to suprass them. Thank you so much for reading btw, I read all of the critics and will improve, just don’t expect a cliche path for John
ch 15 The Tower VI-3rd Floor
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
That’s not the path he’s going to take. That would be far too easy and an overused plot, his grief was apparent at the start, yet it was something he wallowed in, the cold-heart isn’t a way to avoid writing his growth, it’s a skill that also comes with side-effects, and overcoming it is the growth he’s going to achieve. Nothing comes for free and unlike my other characters, John is a chaotic element. And though cold heart allows him to not wallow in sorrow and move forward it also effects him negatively, the story is still in its infancy at this point, for him to have growth he needs a base and the base that will be built upon is still being formed, he lacks a set constriction becuz that’s just who he is, an empty street orphan with high dreams, he’s always out of his depth, someone with a dark path who isn’t chained by it. A truly strong, chaotic, or even free person is someone who has every reason to frown/be sad but still laughs at times. I understand your views for the character but it’s still in its infancy and as what i’m planning for him is unique, you won’t see a lot of the common tropes, he’s meant to feel like a complex and real character, someone with multiple aspects to him, not just [Guy with sad past, must be held back by his past] No! He’s a human.
ch 15 The Tower VI-3rd Floor
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
Already exists
"I'll explain the energies swordsman use, in ascending order there are: Aura-Enhanced Aura-Sword Energy-Sword Aura-Essence-Heart-Being-Truth-Saint Aura-Final Aura-God Sword-Transcendent Sword-Light Edge-Dark-Edge."
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
You’re still really early in the story so just enjoy the ride. I love getting comments though so ask away!
PASSIVES:[Calculative Mind], [Mana Heart],[Sword Heart], [Aura Affinity], [Chantless Magic], [Universal Language].
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
That’s coming up for you in a few chapters, don’t worry I always keep it simple
PASSIVES:[Calculative Mind], [Mana Heart],[Sword Heart], [Aura Affinity], [Chantless Magic], [Universal Language].
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
He hasn’t exactly been defined yet as the story is still in its infancy but he’s a street orphan who’s entire thing is taking risks and living life. As you read further it’ll become clearer. Thank you for reading brw
ch 11 The Tower II-1st Floor
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
A district
"They included some unrelated information such as the Heavy Rain part, but I guess a card is a card either way. Now, let's go hunt some monsters!"
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
Thank you for reading!
ch 0 1 The Death Of John Avery And The Death Of The Strongest God.
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
Thanks for reading!
ch 0 1 The Death Of John Avery And The Death Of The Strongest God.
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
He’s a duke’s son and he’s showing it to the king for his family’s status
I poured every bit of energy in the [Energy Storage] into the orb and numbers began appearing on it. The mage began going crazy as well.
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
You’ve got a long journey coming. I hope you enjoy it and thanks for reading!
Painted with its green blood, I finally felt a release from the strange overpowering rage that had filled my mind.
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
Close but not exactly
[The god [Fallen Ar- ERROR ERRO ERROR $&¿&$¿ has connected to your system.]
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
It’s vague and he its effects aren’t directly useful
STATS: Physique-109, Mana-110, Spirit-73
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
Keep up the good work man, you have a lot of potential!
ch 0 3 The Great Escape
Eastern · GreatCeruleanSword
Great start!
ch 0 1 Yi Zhao
Eastern · GreatCeruleanSword
Thanks for reading!
ch 93 [Old Knight] II
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat
3 is several. Thanks for reading btw
I pushed myself off the wall and controlled my infant body slowly. As a grown man pretending to be a normal 3-year old my movements were impressive.
A Reader’s Regression
Fantasy · DrunkImmortalCat