Actually the concept for this fanfic is unique but rather than novel it feel more like a diary. Maybe you should use Ai less and write by our own.
Ai??
[MC's Speech – A Heroic Call]
Soul Land: Origin of Humanity
Anime & Comics · IAmDivine
Dont know why you edgy folks thinks that monetary support from clan can fill the gap left by ones own parents.
When he first arrived, fate had already dealt him cruel blows. His father was long gone, and his mother had passed not long after giving birth to him, leaving him to grow up as an orphan. Alone, abandoned, and stripped of family, Hayashi quickly realized just how harsh this world was.
Naruto: Path To Godhood.
Anime & Comics · Zeph1
PEAK!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Can you accept such an outcome?"
HPxLOTM: A Wizard's Path to Divinity
Book&Literature · IseeBLACK
Where did you learn that?
The color of a flame is determined by its temperature. As the temperature increases, the flame shifts from red and orange (around 3,000 degrees) to yellow and white (around 4,000 degrees), to cyan and blue (5,000–6,000 degrees), and finally to purple (over 7,000 degrees). A purple flame generated purely by temperature would be no trivial matter.
Douluo: Spiritual Sword
Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
Where do you even found this unholy thing
"It's called...a 'sailor uniform,'" Izayoi said, a hint of excitement in his tone. "I made it myself. Hurry and see if it fits."
Speedrunning Naruto to the Top (Completed)
Anime & Comics · Bleam
No
Her name was Himawari. Loser!
- Hyuga Hazuki (Hyuga Hinata and Hyuga Hanabii's Mother)
Young Master, Please Become Hokage!
Anime & Comics · Boundless_Beacon
Honestly, it's good. But it feels more like a diary than a novel. We do not often get to see MC's perspective. It's like some third person is narrating a story, that's why immersion in this novel is low.
Too many inconsistencies in the timeline.
For example, the cloak Kakuzu was wearing—the uniform of the largest terrorist organization in the ninja world, Akatsuki.
Naruto: I’m Destined to Be Konoha’s Fifth Hokage
Anime & Comics · JinTL