i haven't caught up yet but i enjoy how this book focuses intently on building character dynamics. the narrative is well written and each of the important characters thus far have a unique feel to them. some dialogue transitions could be smoother, and the world background could use a little more depth but overall, i envy your ability to let the plot unfold by itself, without the narrator revealing too much details.
i haven't caught up yet but i enjoy how this book focuses intently on building character dynamics. the narrative is well written and each of the important characters thus far have a unique feel to them. some dialogue transitions could be smoother, and the world background could use a little more depth but overall, i envy your ability to let the plot unfold by itself, without the narrator revealing too much details.