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Screw the imposters playing Among Us in the back. Very shameless of them to steal the work of another author. But it does not matter anymore. The true king is here.

Yooo dude. You have a pretty good story when it comes to the plotline, character design, power structure, and even pacing. If I had to say, the only two things that are so-so would be your grammar and update schedule. The latter is not so much of a problem as you post 5k+ chapters usually, so it’s excusable. I recommend getting someone to review your chapters once you finish them for spelling mistakes. I’m sure you could find someone easily, and if you’d like I’d be down to dedicate some time to do it myself if you can’t find anyone. Other than that, I honestly believe this story is pretty damn good.

I really really REALLY love this story. The world building and design is amazing, the character is not at all obnoxious or cliche, yet still has a lot of development that can be made towards him. The supporting characters such as his pokemon, parents, and Rose and her family are unique and likeable when it comes to personality and relation to the main character. The plot of this story is honestly amazing and I cannot begin to explain how great the world building here is. Honestly someone could make a D&D game out of this world because of how detailed it is when it comes to it's locations, lore, and characters (mainly the legendary pokemon and their whole shebang.) I love the little crossover elements you've added that barely affect the story lore-wise yet are still very fun to have and enjoyable to see as we get to see characters from other animes here without actually being them from the animes. It's also very fun seeing the progress that is being done by Mikail and his pokemon even though we usually need to wait a couple chapters to see a large improvement. If there's one thing with this story that I dislike (not that much by the way) is the pace at which Mikail is growing in terms of age as well as the story development as a whole. Mikail is (if I'm not incorrect) 8-9 years old as of right now, and we are 200+ chapters in. I love this story but I'm afraid that when Mikail starts his journey this is gonna become one of those stories where he steamrolls through the gyms and all of the trainers in the league except the finals where he then miraculously loses against the final one due to the enemy pulling out a mythical/mega-evolution/plot bullshit out of their ass. Though that hasn't happened yet so for now this story is awesome and a complete

This is one of the best fanfics Ive read. Ive been so bored lately and then this shows up out of nowhere. I cannot wait for this fanfic to progress. Author-kun thank you for your hardwork on this fanfic, please keep working hard! I made an account just to review this 5 stars.