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RSmooth
male LV 1Amateur novelist.
2021-11-15 Joined AustraliaBadges 4
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Well, I thought I'll make them young and inexperienced. Most of them are around 20 and Chain is the oldest (23 years old). As the story continues, they will mature over time.
He puts on his LS4 battle armour expecting it to be one of the natives. He walks to the door and opens it. What he sees was a young lady with green long hair wearing what seems to be hunter-style clothes. They both stood there looking at each other's weird appearances. He decided it would be awkward without her seeing his face. He then takes off his helmet so she could see it. She stared at his face with her eyes carefully observing him. There was a brief moment between the two with an awkward silence. The lady then continues rambling on about something he doesn't understand.
The Fate of Nenoria
Fantasy · RSmooth
Just hold on a bit longer. You will see why her character is like this as I will plan later on to explain her character's backgrounds and others too.
"Hey, I didn't agree to that name. I was thinking more of Operation Rescue the Dumbass Who Got Himself Captured in the First Place." Amelia butts in at Kretschmer's naming of the operation.
The Fate of Nenoria
Fantasy · RSmooth
Human Rights!!!
ch 0 3 Rescue the Sergeant
The Fate of Nenoria
Fantasy · RSmooth
Don't worry, she'll mature over time and get a better understanding of her later on.
"Hahaha, you sound just like my mother." Amelia laughs at Chain's concern for her safety. " It took a while to convince mum (She threatened to run away from home) to let me join the military cuz it was sooooo boring at home. Still, who would have expected her to use a dirty trick to get me to join this military unit so she could monitor over me. I bet she's watching us right now from space." Amelia then stuck her tongue out and looked into the sky.
The Fate of Nenoria
Fantasy · RSmooth
The dropship landed and they got out of it from there. I see what you mean. I'll remember not to forget to include these kinds of details.
A noticeable sun shined bright in the radiant blue sky. The ground covered in grass and lustrous trees stood tall. All this seemed very similar to D-Squad however, in reality, this was another planet only similar to Earth's ecosystem. It wasn't long before D-Squad reach their supplies. Their designated location was in the middle of a forest. A wide patch of land around 900sqm which its trees had been cut down by the bots would be their temporary forward outpost. Larger parts of the base were airlifted to the destination and the construction bots would assemble them.
The Fate of Nenoria
Fantasy · RSmooth
Thanks for reading it and giving me your opinion. It's my first time ever writing a novel so I know I would make mistakes along the way in my writing and it won't be to everyone's liking. I aim to improve my work each time I release a chapter and me being a small author means not many people will encounter my work and I wouldn't be able to tell how my readers enjoy the novel since most don't leave a comment or a review so this comment helps me a lot and by better understanding the minds of my readers, so thank you :)
ch 0 4 Gen
The Fate of Nenoria
Fantasy · RSmooth
Thanks for the review! You will find out soon when I release future chapters out.
The Fate of Nenoria
Fantasy · RSmooth