Tense switch. Would be better if it went like "One could tell from his..."
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Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
Mweheheh
On top of that, this would be a test to see how Charlotte and Gary performed in a stressful situation.
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
Haha, correct both ways
I arrived at the outer ring to find Quinn. I knocked on the door, entering upon not getting any response, to find him sitting cross legged on the floor. I could see him grow noticeably, which was a pleasant surprise as this meant his talent was not meagre.
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
I haven’t decided that bit, but it might swing similarly :)
ch 12 -Follow-
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
Hehe, let’s see
ch 11 -Quinn-
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
Hehe, let’s see
ch 11 -Quinn-
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
Yes, he is a noble. Documents are not really a thing in this day and age, especially if most awakeneds can just climb walls most of the time to get into cities. And yes, whether his father actually knows about his whereabouts and identity are unknown
ch 0 9 -Noble-
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
Thanks for the review nii-sama!
Thanks for the review!
How a villain builds a kingdom. And thanks!
Aptly put!
'A chess piece or a chess player? It doesn't matter if all events up to here were your plans, father. Now that I know I am on a chessboard, this will not happen again.'
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
Let’s see~
ch 0 3 -Decision-
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
As there should be :D
ch 0 1 -Creating A Vase-
Fantasy · ObstinateFalcon
Though there's not a lot to go on rn, this is pretty good so far. I can say I haven't seen a starting plot like this, so I'd say it uniquely crafted as well. I like the mc, she's feisty and intelligent. What really gets my gear going, though, is the auxiliary chapter. I can tell the author put a lot of stuff into the power system and worldbuilding, so I'm really looking forward to see all that come to fruition! Overall, recommended read.