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This is just chinese propaganda. Nothing crazy to read. premise is great but clearly Author doesn't care.

exactly my thoughts. Yule Moon incident was really disgusting for me especially Rosie's comeback.

This story is top tier, characters are good but the romance is trash. Rosie is trash. Adhara was great but her poor writing made me realize Author is suffering from Japanese Writer syndrome because she can't do SH*T without MC. Why did you even create Rosie?! I HATE EVERYTHING ABOUT HER CHARACTER. Why is Author so dedicated to add random JP novel tropes like MC getting beat up for no reason? Why did he get a pack so early especially when they're so fucking useless as MC does everything ?! he's a fucking wolf you should've made him a lone one Kratos style hell bent on killing and revenge. Story is great the power system too I love it but you just had to sabotage yourself with all the useless stuff like the poorly executed romance, characters being unable to even breath without MC permission, a useless pack. You write the MC as this know it all then he proceeds to do the dumbest of things. Really ruined it for me and I loved it at first so much.