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The novel has great world building, complex characters with depth and good story arcs. The major problem I have with it is that the mistakes in writing sometimes ruin your immersion. This novel needs serious editing and proofreading. Other than that it is a good novel.

The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

DaoistArTwpo

11mth

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It's a shame no one stole her car too.

ch 41 Mountain Guardian

Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

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DaoistArTwpo

11mth

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You've got good English. The story does require more worldbuilding and context. That is if you're serious about this novel . But otherwise it's a good novel.

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Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

Urban · MZAF