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Well, that's that. Jarring but not as much as a gut punch as Age of Adepts.

Finally, someone acknowledging the potential insecurities around being transmigration.

if I recall 2 likes gets you something so have a like!

completely forgot about sherlock Holmes. so maybe there is a divergent point in time. seems like in the 90s maybe.

wait so Comics exist but HP doesn't. I dint understand the rules. I'm going with it either way, just saying.

spoiler, later on he has someone sexually violated for robbing him so I guess I spoke to soon.

5 tickets for the author! mainly out of relief. ha ha. the thoughts of the protagonist are likely there to have a starting point for growth rather than the authors actual thoughts! I know you shouldn't assume this anyway but unfortunately it's clear most times that it is the authors viewpoint (especially in, though not exclusive to, translated novels) its just a cudos for the fact I don't have to ignore trash morality to proceed with the story.

completely agree.

I'm sorry to say that Harry Potter isn't actually well thought out. I am happy he has made revisions but he keeps putting all the 'system' works on a pedestal, it's starting to get irksome. Props to JKs success but the HP series is all over the place and there was no overall plan from the start. I'm saying this as someone who's first book series was Harry Potter and is a fan.

Sorry, rushed my response, what do you mean the power scaling it's all over the place? When you make a claim, please back it up with evidence or an example.

No cos saying change the whole chapter isn't constructive criticism! Also, cringe is personal to you! How does anyone know what you find cringe worthy! If the whole chapter is cringe, you should find it easy to pick one example and explain why you found it cringe.

Pet peeve of mine, if you're going to criticise, make it constructive! Asking for less cringe without explaining what you found cringe worthy is just exasperating and unhelpful.

Makes it a better story narratively. Fully on-board.

Probably have his own mental pantheon by the end of the series. So, the question I have now... is Ves schizophrenic?