I liked how the story went and it later develops, and then has emotional impact. Good story, keep it up! ❤ I as well like the FL's attitude.
Fantasy · Stephanie
The plot seems to be interesting. There are no grammar errors and typos so far. But the emotions are still quite lacking. Overall it's good. 👍
Urban · proking
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I liked how the story went and it later develops, and then has emotional impact. Good story, keep it up! ❤ I as well like the FL's attitude.
Supernatural
Fantasy · Stephanie